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ParisGrl
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0 posted 2001-10-25 06:58 PM


Tears of sorrow I sit and cry, silently asking the question why
Why do I feel the way I feel for you, you have shone your true colors, through and through
You are not who I thought you were, why did I hang on so tight?  Praying to God with all my might.
I will forever now let you be, I don't want to see your face you see
You have truly hurt me now, I thought you were better than that somehow
I will pretend you don't exist, this is my last and final wish

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RosePetal
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1 posted 2001-10-25 07:52 PM


Awww im sorry that you are sad
A man that makes you cry isnt worth your tears
A man who is worth your tears wont make u cry
Remember that! ((hugs)) feel better soon

Startime
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2 posted 2001-10-25 09:06 PM


*sigh* my heart goes out to you. Sometimes we want their love so badly we are blind to who they really are. When our eyes and mind finally see the truth we can be broken hearted. Just remember your love is priceless and worthy only of the best in return. *hugs*

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2001-10-25 09:14 PM




(big hugggssssss) My heart cries out to your sadness, I don't know what to say! (sad sigh) Your beautiful heart deserves to be loved so dearly, and I pray that you will soon find this special sweet caring love and he can no more hurt your feelings! (sad sigh) My heart is with you, dearest friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton



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4 posted 2001-10-25 09:22 PM


Lovely but sad write...well penned.  Love the style.  ~hugs, Nancy~

  ~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Sven
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5 posted 2001-10-25 09:58 PM


Laura,

all we can do is let go. . . and hope. . .

hugs to you my friend. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

ParisGrl
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6 posted 2001-10-26 09:35 AM


Thank you all for your words of sympathy.  John, you are right. (like always)  LOL  All I can do is let go.  

Thanks all for reading!

~Laura~

Kendaall
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7 posted 2001-10-26 11:01 AM


Parisgrl, I know how you feel it's such a familiar place. I too have loved only to be left with unresolved feelings for someone who now appears to be a stranger. Hold fast and be strong we can never go back nor would we want to. Though your heart was broken and your words are so sad your road to recovery is clearly in front of you. Best wishes for that solitary journey.
ParisGrl
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8 posted 2001-10-26 01:13 PM


Kendaal,

Thank you very much for your warm wishes.  I appreciate them.

~Laura~

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