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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2001-10-25 06:22 PM


I call upon four-cornered wind,
and whisper names of guardian
a summons now I call to thee--
angels lend your ear to me.

Fly low, fly low,
you'll find me there...
knees and elbow
crawl despair...
embattlement
of self in spent
clipped wings
assured descent
I summon all
you've my consent--
ascend, Ascend,
the Raptured stair.

*repost from open 12*


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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2001-10-25 06:34 PM


I heard your whispered chant upon the wind
and thought you called my name
to show you where this stair does wind
throughout the love of humankind.


C'est moi.

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (edited 10-25-2001).]

catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
2 posted 2001-10-25 06:52 PM


You write such beautiful spells. Can we make them work?
Good luck.
Sandra

Dark Angel
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3 posted 2001-10-25 07:10 PM


Oh Oh I love this, so enchanting just like you Gorgeous! I don't know how I missed it, glad I found it now though.

Hugs You!

Maree

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26
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Ontario, CANADA
4 posted 2001-10-25 10:21 PM


This is way cool, I love this!~

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

5 posted 2001-10-27 03:30 PM


I read your poetry for inspiration, do you know this?  I'm on a sabbatical of sorts, trying to sort out my life (God what a job)
but I love reading poetry, so I still pop in from time to time.  This is wonderful!

Kathleen
nickname "Kay"

"Others can stop you temporarily, but only you can do it permanently."

Startime
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since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
Canada
6 posted 2001-10-27 04:31 PM


Your soul cries out to other worlds beseeching them to hear your plea. So incredibly beautiful. I love it.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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