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Suetang
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0 posted 2001-10-25 06:12 PM


From across the room I saw you
As you stood out amongst the crowd
The place was really buzzing
As the music played so loud

From over my glass I watched you
So handsome did you seem
Then I saw you walk towards me
Surely this had to be a dream?

But my eyes did not deceive me
As you smiled and said 'Hello'
It was at that moment I realised
Much more of you I'd like to know

You lead me to the dance floor
As you enveloped me in your arms
Soon I felt myself surrendering
To your smile and all its charms

As we danced so close together
I felt like I was walking on air
We had eyes only for one another
And it seemed just you and I were there

Our souls became one that evening
As two hearts were beating in time
And as I lay my head on your shoulder
I knew from that moment you'd be mine

Suetang

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Gaia
1 posted 2001-10-25 06:26 PM


Oh, what a lucky lady you are! And that was a magical moment when he asked you for that dance of a lifetime. (Hope it's true!)
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2 posted 2001-10-25 06:38 PM


such a beautiful setting to fall in love.
In the arms of someone that you feel so
right about.  Beautiful poem Sue.

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2001-10-25 06:39 PM


Sounds like a romantic slow dance...do you remember the tune?   James
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