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MyEnchanted_Melody
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~*~ Your Rose ~*~


I am your rose
soft and delicate
Keep me
A precious gift to your heart
Dipped forever in your every breath
Keep me close
Close
There near your heart
In your pocket
A token never
Totally known

Yes…keep me there
And I’d remain
Silent
Listening to your heart beats
Trembling with every breath you take
As I feel the movement of air
When you inhale it mixed with my scent
Feeling cold and freezing
Whenever you take me off
That safe place
Where I belong most.

Dozing safely
As I listen to that echoing music
Of your beats
And wake up as the rhythm changes
To a faster one
Whenever you hear my name
And you whisper it again
And again
As you remember the visions
I left there
Held in your eyes
Eternally.

You touch my petals
And shiver
Making me shiver more than before
Wondering why do you shiver
Do you remember the velvet touch of me?
Do you yearn for it secretly?


Lost in my thoughts
I was…
And you…?
Lost in worlds of me
Or so it seems
Silence was between us
Counted with your breath
I was dozing
Surrounded by you
And half the way
To dreams

Suddenly
My world shook
The walls trembled
And I found myself falling
Falling
From that lofty height
Near your heart
What happened?
I didn’t know
The world was gliding fast
And that’s all I saw
Frightened
I closed my eyes
So not to see
That I’d end up
Far down
From my place
Tears gathered in me
Screams mounted my every breath
Did u see them?
Did you hear them?
I didn’t know
I didn’t wish to see
All that I saw
Falling so fast
Yet so slow
But….
As I was getting so near
The edge I fear
Your fingers
Caught me
Your hand held me
Desperately
And I was caught in a wind
Of your breath
As you looked at me
Closely
And whispered
“Are you safe?…
Were you hurt?
Oh…..forgive me
It was my sigh
The hurricane of my sigh
That caused you to fall
Lost in my dreams of you
I didn’t see that
I was about to lose you”

A reassuring touch
A soft hush
A delicate kiss
And I was back again
Where I should remain
In that safe place
To hear your musical refrain.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Thank you



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BtwnRockandHardPlace
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thank you for a wonderful poem, with graphics and music to sing into my soul.

*~*~*~*~
Benita
*~*~*~*~
The truth of the matter is that you always know the right thing to do. The hard part is doing it.
-Gen. Schwarzkoff

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2 posted 10-25-2001 01:43 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

I'm always amazed at the forms that you use, and the emotions that you can get out of your words. . .

wonderfully done my friend. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Interloper
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Deep in the heart


3 posted 10-25-2001 02:34 PM       View Profile for Interloper   Email Interloper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Interloper

Beautiful, just beautiful!  One of the few long poems I'd read

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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4 posted 10-25-2001 02:54 PM       View Profile for Mistletoe Angel   Email Mistletoe Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Mistletoe Angel's Home Page   View IP for Mistletoe Angel



(big hugggssssss) Oh my gosh, this is sooooooo beautiful! (sigh) I know those sighs of love ever so well too, where you feel so weak and trembling because of the heavenly angelic beauty of love! (sigh) Your love will always be the rose of your sweet heart, sweet friend! (smiles) I love it!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton
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~BtwnRockandHardPlace~

And thank you dearly for your kind words....

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

~Sven~

My friend.....you won't believe how unexpected this poem came ....
I'have just let my pen flow in this one without exerting much control on it.

I am soooo glad that you
have enjoyed it...
I always cherish your opinion

Thank you
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
~Interloper~

I'm happy that you loved it despite its length

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
~Noah~

And you have such a beautiful soul that shines through your wonderful kindness and warm hugs....
I am positively glad that you have loved it so.....
Thank you dearest and warm {{{{{ hugs }}}}

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

MARK V SHELDON
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In a corporeal internship...


6 posted 10-26-2001 11:21 AM       View Profile for MARK V SHELDON   Email MARK V SHELDON   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit MARK V SHELDON's Home Page   View IP for MARK V SHELDON

Aromatically beautiful and magically ethereal...  very dreamy.  Better colors and animation than Disney.  What a lovely thought to host such an enchanting spirit...

-MVS

"Learn to let go of fear, doubt, and disbelief..."  --THE MATRIX

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catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone


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Oh my, how beautiful. I feel just this way, too, but sadly, no one wants me for his rose.
WOnderful poem, Melody
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8 posted 10-26-2001 11:33 AM       View Profile for RSWells   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RSWells

Ah! This rose needs to be pressed between the pages of romance....to be savored forever.

"Happy people have no history" - French Proverb

MyEnchanted_Melody
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~Mark~

Would you host such a spirit??  
I'm so humbly thrilled that you have loved it my friend.

Thank you as ever for such wonderful comments that sing enchantingly...

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

~Sandra~

I'm sure someone out there is wishing silently that you'd be his precious rose....perhaps you simply don't know it.
Such a wonderful lady as yourself would certainly makes any one proud to have her as a rose....
So smile and the sun would shine soon  

Thank you dearly
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
~RSWells~

"Savord forever" in the heart....

Thank you for your wonderful words...
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~



vlraynes
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MyEnchanted_Melody-
   Beautifully penned thoughts here.
   Enjoyed.
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

MyEnchanted_Melody
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~Vicky~

Thank you soooo much for reading it.
I'm glad that you enjoyed it...

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Earth Angel
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12 posted 07-06-2005 12:07 AM       View Profile for Earth Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Earth Angel's Home Page   View IP for Earth Angel

You have been writing about all of my favourite flowers! Each and every one of yours that I have read, has been magical!


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