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Open Poetry #16

The Theory of Love

BtwnRockandHardPlace
Member

since 2001-10-23

Posts 98
NJ, USA

0 posted 2001-10-25 01:10 PM

the theory says
that energy
it can neither be
created nor destroyed
but what of love
when it is lost
does it simply go
into the void
I feel, like energy
we can not create love
if it is true
the love I've lost for him
has gone to YOU!

[This message has been edited by BtwnRockandHardPlace (edited 10-25-2001).]

Domzi
Member

since 2001-09-08

Posts 288
New York (BK)

1 posted 2001-10-25 03:07 PM

Excellent write!
I've never really read a poem that's sounded like this.

As my borough has always stated- Do or Die.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2001-10-25 03:13 PM

(smiles) We can all together create the spirit of love through friendship and soul and together we can create harmony in shared love! (smiles) BRAVO BENITA!!! Your words speak so beautifully and truly! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Benita, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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