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walker
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0 posted 2001-10-25 07:50 AM


Kiss me like this
I need to feel your lips
without words
telling me
how I make you feel
Love me like this
eagerly
your touch on my body
provoking me
Play with my senses
do with them what you please
Don't let me be
in your arms
I want to be
Make love to me like this
erotically
fulfilling
all my fantasies
Coming together
passionately
in this ecstasy


© Copyright 2001 walker - All Rights Reserved
serenity blaze
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1 posted 2001-10-25 08:17 AM


smiling....I'll circle "yes' and pass ya the note back in class....(thanks walt..grin)

but OH YES!!!!

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2 posted 2001-10-25 08:49 AM




(sigh) Awwwww, this is soooooo romantic, sweet friend! (sigh) Such a beautiful perfect kiss that will forever melt your heart with your true love's. (smiles) I love it, sweet friend, your words are always timelessly romantic! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Startime
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3 posted 2001-10-25 09:45 AM


*sigh* sensually romantic. I am sure you would receive the right response to this. *sigh* very nice indeed.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

WindWalker
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4 posted 2001-10-25 11:12 AM


This was a very good read!!!!!!!!
BtwnRockandHardPlace
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5 posted 2001-10-25 11:34 AM


I loved it! It says how I have felt in my life for so very long. Thank you.

*~*~*~*~
Benita
*~*~*~*~
The truth of the matter is that you always know the right thing to do. The hard part is doing it.
-Gen. Norman Schwarzkoff

[This message has been edited by BtwnRockandHardPlace (edited 10-25-2001).]

Abigaile
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6 posted 2001-10-25 11:58 AM


Fantastic work. Makes me want to go home a bit early and... *giggle*

"I am nae poet, in a sense;
But just a rhymer like by chance..."
-Robert Burns

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
7 posted 2001-10-25 12:38 PM


Gee...everybody is getting so passionate here at Passions!  WOW!  I love this one too!
~hugs, Nancy~

  ~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Duncan
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8 posted 2001-10-25 01:24 PM


Wow...and all before coffee!
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just out of reach
9 posted 2001-10-25 01:35 PM


Wow...walker!! You are going to need to borrow my sister's chapstick!! Very sensual. Everyone is feeling the change in the seasons me thinks. Loved it. Chris  

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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Deep in the heart
10 posted 2001-10-25 03:55 PM


Whoa!  I gotta watch out or I might start writing some of this sensual stuff again

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

JamesMichael
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11 posted 2001-10-25 06:25 PM


Lots of good sensual action going on here...james
Suetang
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12 posted 2001-10-26 12:26 PM


So sensual and so romantic.  Take care....Sue

Suetang

Cerenity
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13 posted 2001-10-27 08:29 AM


Hi Walker,

I hope your love responded to this one, very wow, wow, WOW, loved the feelings in this, great work.

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



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