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Kevin Taylor
Member

since 1999-12-23

Posts 185
near Vancouver, BC, Canada

0 posted 2001-10-24 07:42 PM

You said "I don't"
I said "I do"
You said "I won't"
I did for you
You said "I can't"
I could and did
You said "I need"
I did not give

Perhaps when all
Is said we failed
To understand
What love entails.

Kevin

"Poetry is, at once, what you get... and how you get there."

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2001-10-24 07:56 PM

Saddd..........short and to the point

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

2 posted 2001-10-24 08:06 PM

Indeed, Indeed!

Honest and straight to the point.
enjoyed

Maree

[This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 10-24-2001).]

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2001-10-24 08:10 PM

(big hugggssssss) Oh Kevin, this is so so sad! Your words are so sincere and honest and speaks with tears! (sigh) My heart is with you, and I pray that you find love that your dear heart can relate to! (sigh) Sad but wonderful, dearest friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kevin, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

4 posted 2001-10-24 09:53 PM

Wow, pretty directly expressed in so few words. I like the style of this

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

5 posted 2001-10-24 09:56 PM

o yuh i have felt this...nice write yuh

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2001-10-24 10:02 PM

Kevin, This is very good. Sort of a 'he said'-'she said' Very well done! ~Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

RocketRide
Junior Member

since 2000-10-06

Posts 13
USA

7 posted 2001-10-24 10:26 PM

i thoroughly enjoyed this. you might want to look at line breaks, especially near the last stanza, just to make it easier to read, but overall i thought it was really wonderful because it is both sides of a conversation that most of us usually only hear one side of.
peace,
rocketride

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2001-10-25 06:03 AM

Interesting...James

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