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wayoutwalt
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0 posted 2001-10-24 03:47 PM



If dark and stormy nights
are preludes to our lives
is gloom and bitter wind?

Then happy e'er afters
and canned phony laughters
are how the book will end?



[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 10-24-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-10-24 03:55 PM


Um, yes...I think you got it Walt!!
....I think....not sure though....
....don't take my word for it, okay?......
             ~hugs, Nancy~

  ~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

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2 posted 2001-10-24 08:25 PM


*giggling* mmmmm yep...you could be right. Well done.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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3 posted 2001-10-24 11:08 PM


Walt,
Can I get back to you on this?  

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4 posted 2001-10-24 11:11 PM


Walt; Is this a riddle? :-)  I am still scratching my head on this one.  Wanda
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5 posted 2001-10-25 04:34 PM


and this is a good example of why you have
the pen name....I think I understand...

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6 posted 2001-10-25 05:26 PM



Huh?

Uh, ok...I think.

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7 posted 2001-10-25 05:46 PM


You are way out there this time, waltie. And I've never talked to anyone who knows how it really ends, except in my imagination and dreams. But I began in a burst of light, I'm sure of that.
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8 posted 2001-10-25 06:11 PM


Walt....no one told me there was gonna be a quiz...I hate those pop quizes.....don't have time for cheat sheets...went out  and didn't study.....ummmm...what was the question again? lol. hugs, Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

wayoutwalt
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9 posted 2001-10-25 09:55 PM


just to be less cryptic I should have called this Book Ends but the meaning is if thebook starts as dark and stormy night then shouldn't it end happily ever after?
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