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Mistletoe Angel
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0 posted 2001-10-24 01:43 PM


In The Candlelight (Sonnet)
By: Noah Eaton
9/5/01

Lay down beside me and I'll touch your lips
Hearing you breathe next to me in delight
Caressing velvet flesh, tracing your hips
Close your eyes, my love, as I touch your thighs
The stars dance in your glimmering heart
Tossing angels hair across your warm face
I share your reverie, which will never part
Smother me in your sweet heather and lace
Lure me into your arms, my sweet red rose
You are the angel I lovingly hold
I'll kiss your eyelids as we gently doze
Under satin sheets seductive in gold
In the candlelight, I'll make love to you
Whispering paradise to love so true...

© Copyright 2001 Nadia Lockheart - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-10-24 02:17 PM


Very beautiful poem!
This flickers in radiance


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2 posted 2001-10-24 02:20 PM


Oh This sounds so beautiful Noah!

Feeling the heat of your body next to mine
It's a comfort I've never felt before
We hold eachother passing the time
Sharing sweet love so pure

just thought I'd add a poetic response : )

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3 posted 2001-10-24 02:25 PM


Noah,

I love these words, so very touching. It makes me long for my true love to be here with me now.

Peace,


*~*~*~*~
Benita
*~*~*~*~
The truth of the matter is that you always know the right thing to do. The hard part is doing it.

-Gen. Norman Schwarzkoff

[This message has been edited by BtwnRockandHardPlace (edited 10-25-2001).]

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4 posted 2001-10-24 02:32 PM


Beautiful, romantic, and sensual write Noah.  
Enjoyed,  ~hugs, Nancy~

  ~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

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5 posted 2001-10-24 03:10 PM


i think its great yuh
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6 posted 2001-10-24 03:20 PM


Sounds like a sweet love, Noah.
I'm happy for you, if it's yours.
Sandra

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