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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium 
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days come by and nights tread on and the clock ticks a quick moment at a time when the present tense becomes a thing of the past and the past turns into history - lost, it is all about speed it is all about moving on, a cliché of being in motion, yet often we grip a moment and keep a snapshot of our feelings of that briefest of all times close to our heart deep inside our chest - safe, can't lock it up forever, though and with the slightest daylight, the shadows return as if re-affirming the very existence of darkness - cave, while the crosswords of the day's newspapers align themselves into some attention-grabbing happenings as a comet drops right on the head and a realization strikes ordering the being to stop dreaming so that the chance of getting nightmares is negated into case of optical illusions, spell and then today has gone has become yesterday almost spontaneously and an unwitting thought arrives, visit one year -?- what's this? wherefrom? don't know... don't ask me, seems like my muse jumped on me, and I'm stumped "I was born intelligent - education ruined me" |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Your snapshots were always interesting, and this is another of them...so good to have you back...you were gone far, far too long! |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
we are all stumped in a way, my friend...good to read you. -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sudhir, this is wonderfully written. I am becoming a great fan of the way you write! Enjoyed, Nancy. ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
So much of the time, we spend going in circles wondering if we're really going anywhere... the years blurring together except for certain identifiable events... I think you've just written life, Sudhir. *G* yet often we grip a moment and keep a snapshot of our feelings of that briefest of all times close to our heart deep inside our chest - safe, I particularly love these lines... Even if those moments are fleeting, even if we lose them... it's those moments that keep us going on. *S* I like this very much! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
stumped or not..I got your message...... ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
it is all about speed it is all about moving on, a cliché of being in motion, yet often we grip a moment and keep a snapshot of our feelings of that briefest of all times close to our heart deep inside our chest - safe, Yes Sudhir, "the past turns into history" but it is not lost. This is wonderful indeed m'friend, I really enjoyed reading you again  Maree |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
I am so glad to see that my friends are here for me... Thank you very much regards, Sudhir |
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