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BtwnRockandHardPlace
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0 posted 2001-10-26 10:39 AM






When you kissed me last night
There was electricity
It jumped from your lips to mine

When we embraced
Our body temperatures combined
The heat began and passion flowed

I felt your breath against my neck
You whispered in my ear gentle words
Your love for me you showed

As you slowly touched my soft white skin
My body melted beneath you
I can think of no place I'd rather be
Than in your arms, as you're holding me

And we rocked back and forth in rhythm
As only two lovers can
Who are in tune with each other

And when entwined in such a way
The rapture did slowly build
We climbed the mountain together, my love

And when we reached the very peak
Our desire to join in ecstasy
Became fulfilled





[This message has been edited by BtwnRockandHardPlace (edited 10-26-2001).]

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1 posted 2001-10-26 10:46 AM


*sigh* and that is the way of it for lovers. How sensually beautiful this poem is. Thank you so much for sharing it today.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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2 posted 2001-10-26 11:13 AM




(sigh) Sooooooo sensually passionate! (sigh) Such love fills your beautiful words, sweet Benita! May your golden heart froever be filled with ecstacy! I LOVE IT!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Benita, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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