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wayoutwalt
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0 posted 2001-10-24 11:09 AM



Gee…MC Jimmy said
As he set the records spinning
Look at the crowd in the house
And the night is just beginning

MC Jimmy worked clubs in Tahoe
Most famous for his blazer
All the folks from the suburban streets
Said he wasn’t the sharpest laser

But his jacket was so wild
It escaladed tension
And all the dancers writhed so much
It was worthy of a mention

That night they took ole Jimmy
His passport had expired
His expedition now was over
He couldn’t escape for he was tired

The records still are spinning
Jimmy gained his liberty
From the sequoia living azteks
Who like music just like me

Can you afford excursions
Deep into the sacred woods
You will hear the hummers
Who can’t sing his songs so good

In the still of a hopping night
From here to the Yukon valley
You can here Jimmy spinning
A mix of “Long Tall Sally”
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Ok pick out all the SUV's you can! and uh oh don't worry there will be more types of cars in the following installments!


[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 10-24-2001).]

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Victoria
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1 posted 2001-10-24 11:31 AM


Good job Walt..hope the interest rate is 0%..like it is here in Amarillo till
the end of the month...

                                       ~Victoria~

wayoutwalt
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2 posted 2001-10-24 11:34 AM


O yuh that it is and that's why I am diggin out the dough here in Ft Worth!
The Rusty Knight
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3 posted 2001-10-24 11:41 AM


I think there are mor SUV's than cars now.  The Beamer of the '00's.  That is supposed to be two zeros, but it looks like me after three espressos.  I like your poem and SUV's.  If an expedition is longer than an excursion, why is an Excursion longer than and Expedition?

Death comes not when we cease to breathe, but when we cease to dream.

Amused Cupid
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4 posted 2001-10-24 12:39 PM


Awesome poem you have penned here   I doubt I caugt all the SUV's seems there are more of them these days springing up everywhere. Just wish I knew where all the money is to buy them...LOL
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5 posted 2001-10-24 01:58 PM


Walt, Now, I counted 10, but then again I am not really up on vehicles. I liked this. Makes me kinda wish that my hubby still had his Jeep...covered in mud from finding trails in parts unkown.......hugs, Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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6 posted 2001-10-24 02:02 PM


Creative Walt writes another cute poem!
I have a chevy blazer, I love it!

[This message has been edited by RosePetal (edited 10-24-2001).]

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7 posted 2001-10-24 02:24 PM


Cool write Walt!  OH YUH!  
~chuckles and hugs, Nancy~

  ~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

wayoutwalt
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8 posted 2001-10-24 02:26 PM


A few more than ten o yuh hehehe thanks all for reading
cruz
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9 posted 2001-11-10 03:10 PM


i see 13 (unless liberty is one, then it's 14) hummer's tha best, though.  eye like it a lot! sorry so late on the reply but i just had to prop it up...
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