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BtwnRockandHardPlace
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since 2001-10-23
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0 posted 2001-10-24 11:04 AM


There is logic,
What we KNOW is right
There are feelings,
What we FEEL is right
Where do they meet?

When the rational and irrational
Minds agree
Then life is simple,
We are free

But often it isn't so
We are pulled and tugged
Not knowing which way to go

When our heart and mind are split
We're torn apart, tormented
I feel this way

My darling, I love you everyday
But my mind tells me it shouldn't be
When I listen to my head
I know that we should quit

When I listen to my heart
I realize without you I'm dead
There is no such thing
As 'Logical Feelings'
When we involve our heart
There are no rational dealings

© Copyright 2001 Benita Amedeo - All Rights Reserved
Decaflame
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since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635

1 posted 2001-10-24 02:01 PM



So very right with the feel and know of this...

well done!

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2001-10-24 02:11 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Benita, my heart cries out to your sorrow, and I understand just how you feel! (sigh) I am a heart over head kind of person, and I believe that to love someone with all their heart while also accepting judgment is the love thats bound to last! (sigh) My heart cries out to you, and I pray that you may find the sweet love that both your heart feels happy for and can accept! (sigh) You always write so wonderfully, dearest friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bemita, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

wayoutwalt
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3 posted 2001-10-24 03:04 PM


o yuh heart tales are never linear..nice write yuh
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