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Alan
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0 posted 2001-10-24 08:39 AM



Until you touched me
I had never been touched
The way you touched me
When you loved me
Now I wonder
Will I ever be the same



© Copyright 2001 Alan - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2001-10-24 08:40 AM


Alan,
I don't think so. Enjoyed

Alan
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2 posted 2001-10-24 08:45 AM


Seymour..I must agree.once touched there is no turning back..thanks for reading and replying
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3 posted 2001-10-24 08:45 AM




(smiles) Aw, this is so sweet! (sigh) Things will never be the same again, for love changes everything deep down in the heart. (smiles) May this sweet love forever flourish in your heart, sweet friend! (sigh) I love it!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Alan, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2001-10-24 08:48 AM


Sounds like love has come to you. Great write, wonderful read. I love to read when people fall in love.  
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5 posted 2001-10-24 08:49 AM



Nope.  Spoiled rotten.  Can tell.  Never the same again!

Enjoyed the write!

Alan
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6 posted 2001-10-24 08:52 AM


Noah my friend.love does change you sometimes to the good, sometimes to the bad. Just got to go with the flow.

Startime..Love has not nor am I looking..I have just decided to try to love myself...thanks for reading

Sunshine...thanks for reading...isn't it funny how love can spoil someone...

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7 posted 2001-10-24 09:22 AM


You've got it Alan.  You have to love yourself first....then all of a sudden WHAM....she touches you and you are never the same.  Good write in just a few words.
~Nancy~

  ~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

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8 posted 2001-10-24 09:24 AM


it is an awesome feeling to be touched by someone and to know, you will never be the same....this is fantastic Alan....   (((hugs)))  
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9 posted 2001-10-24 09:27 AM


Alan, I know that once we have been touched in that special way, we are never the same. Love is wonderful and painful both at times.
LOVED THIS

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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10 posted 2001-10-24 10:20 AM


This is so sweet. Sounds like you are in love.
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11 posted 2001-10-24 10:37 AM


nice
BloomingRose
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12 posted 2001-10-24 11:06 AM


Oh yeah. That's love my friend.

Deb

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13 posted 2001-10-24 01:16 PM


hey alan!  

love is an awesome thing...and love will change you wether you know it or not..and love will have you when you are ready, not before...    youre on the right track; love yourself first..hard to do sometimes..*sigh*..but when you get it right, all else will fit into place..  

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"what if jesus comes back like that..will he cry when he sees where our hearts are at?..." c.raye

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14 posted 2001-10-24 02:02 PM


Alan- This is lovley. Well done. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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15 posted 2001-10-24 04:20 PM


Alan, very powerful is so few words.  Well
done.  If this is about loving yourself,
forgive your self first.  that is a start.
Good Luck.

snowpants
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16 posted 2001-10-24 07:49 PM


Something we all wonder at one point in our lives...but you expressed it very well, Alan...great write...

sp  

And did you know with the rain in your pockets,
you can change the weather...

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17 posted 2001-10-24 10:49 PM


Touch is all it takes to make us whole. When you can touch your own heart and feel good, you will be ready to touch and be touched again. I understand, as I've only recently allowed myself that loving personal touch, having sworn off all relationships after the last one failed.
Tracey
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18 posted 2001-10-24 10:59 PM


People say I'm touched in the head. Oh, that's not the kind of touching you're talking about!!! LOL. Seriously, nice write

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

nakdthoughts
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19 posted 2001-10-25 03:30 AM


loving thyself seems like a vey good choice, Alan.

hugssss
~Wynter

"For it was not into my ear you whispered, but into my heart. It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul."
(J.Garland)

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