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Angry |
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Lisa Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 88Lunenburg,VT USA |
I hold my anger close to me I wrap it tight around And if I hold it close enough My hurt will not be found The tears won’t fall; my heart won’t break And no one will know my pain Cause no one knows how much I hurt No one can understand My eyes may burn, but not one tear Will I allow to fall, For it’s far better to be angry Than it is to bawl You may say that it is folly Or simply foolish pride But I know what it really is A place for me to hide Someday soon I’ll let it out God will hear me pray Of the anger, hurt, and fear, So it may go away Lisa ‘01 |
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Zukene_Chic Member
since 2001-09-26
Posts 152Cali |
maybe it will leave you... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Write about it.....it is sometimes easier to express feelings on paper than to let them come out of our mouths.....paper is more forgiving....Your poem says a lot... and...believe it or not...it is a start. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
let it out!! cry!! scream!! YELL!! (go out to the mountains or something .... do NOT do this at the mall... they might carry you away  ), but anyway... hehe.... pent up anger is very dangerous for your health.....writing it's good.... crying is better...  hey, that's why they call us "humans" right? |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
Lisa, yes, oh yes, pent up anger either turns into depression or rage...or both....well written and keep writing -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
It helps me to write about it...James |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
write it baby write it! |
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