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MIdnight Blue
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MIdnight Blue |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT 
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Midnight Blue As day comes to an end and my thoughts layer the sky in shades of colour that blend the moment of your good-bye Waves of blue with hints of red share the emotional tears my eyes and heavy heart bled to the sky and on for years And as time swallows the light and distant stars shine for few emptiness fills one more night as I fill with Midnight Blue. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ctowen, And as time swallows the light and distant stars shine for few emptiness fills one more night as I fill with Midnight Blue. As I said once before the color blue represents an unknown quanity, so there is hope. |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
This was a very good read!!!!!!! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this is a bittersweet cadence kissed beauty. the blue melancholy wrapped in rhyme, aches off the page. Meets my mood well today. well done poet. jm This distance has shown how the road remains alone |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
While this has a sad tone to it, Midnight blue can change its hue so suddenly that it leaves me hopeful for you. A good poem, that left me thinking in blue. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nicely done, I enjoyed this. Thanx. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent write! Enjoyed, Nancy. ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
I loved this. Poetic verse nestled in the warmth of my heart, reveals the sweet yearnings of my soul.... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I love the color Midnight Blue..paint with it all the time. ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Craig, this is so so sad and I can feel your heart cry throughout these words! (sad sigh) Hearts can be blue, but soon joy will fill your tears and you will be singing with sunshine gold! (sigh) My heart is with you, dearest friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Craig, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Good write CT. Midnight Blue, yup, that describes the mood perfectly. I'll be thinking of that colour now, next time I'm reminiscing for my lost love If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Yes, this is a perfect poem for this feeling. Very well done. And boy do I know the feeling.. Sandra |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Seymour/Midnitesun - Blue does represent unknown quanities ... and so does the Midnight Sky. Windwalker - Been awhile ... thanx!! Janet - Sorry you ache so today ... I will try and make your tomorrow better. Magnus - Thank you and welcome! Nancy - Glad you liked and, "yes", you are unforgetable! Caress - I am pleased you felt its soft touch. Wynter - There has not been a Wynter's night that was not midnight blue in some thirty years ... may I say you paint well!! Noah - Thank you much, keep shining!! Tracey - You would look so much better wrapped in white clouds. I hope you don't spend to much time reminiscing. Sandra - Thank you, I believe we all have seen such a sky, I rather hope yours are filled with stars. **s** |
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