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WhiteKnight
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0 posted 2001-10-23 09:54 AM


Blue
by WhiteKnight

Blue, the color of the sky
makes me wonder why
when were lonely we say we're blue
Why is this true?

Blue skies
Blueberry pies,
Blue cars
Blue backgrounds
Why do I like these things around?

Blue songs
Blue faces
Blue people
all get me down
why do I like Blue around?

I can not explain what I do not know
But Blue, I would never want to go
Blue can be happy
sometimes sad

Why do I feel blue without you?
I can not explain what I do not know
But you, I never want to let go.

© Copyright 2001 Corey Rugar - All Rights Reserved
Startime
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1 posted 2001-10-23 09:58 AM


Well said. I never thought to consider blue but you are right it can be both happy and sad. I really like the way you wrote this poem.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2001-10-23 09:59 AM


WhiteKnight,
Blue is the color of the unknown. Enjoyed

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3 posted 2001-10-23 10:59 AM



I like this poem, but love Sy's response....so it can be said, blue is inspiration as well...

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