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HopeS
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0 posted 2001-10-23 06:53 AM


With Contents Sincere

In the building love
Be more constructive
For the unrequited
Is so self-destructive

In building together
For lasting endurance
Two heart’s equally
Each giving assurance

In creating the basis
With strength to attain
Love and respect
Support and maintain

In heart collabration
Decorate and design
To evenly enhance
Love jointly combine

In the matter of love
Clasp hold  the hand
Sharing heart key
A gift to understand

In providing a heart
Growing year by year
Love is to balance
With contents sincere

Hope©2001


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Tracey
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since 2001-08-29
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1 posted 2001-10-23 07:35 AM


Lovely, and with such truth written in the lines

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

Startime
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since 2000-10-03
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2 posted 2001-10-23 09:35 AM


BRAVO!!!You have said it all perfectly. Well done, Hope.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

HopeS
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3 posted 2001-10-23 11:16 AM


Thanks Tracey
I do appreciate your kind reply
Hope

HopeS
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4 posted 2001-10-23 11:21 AM


thanks Karen
yes honesty shared
is a must
Love will last
with one you entrust
Hope

WindWalker
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5 posted 2001-10-23 11:54 AM


This was a very good read!!!!!!!!!
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