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ctowen
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since 2001-10-18
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Green Mountains of VT

0 posted 2001-10-23 01:22 AM


Love Lost

The day had start lost in fears
a cold wind blew by my face
my love starved heart frost in tears
just crushed to shreds in its place
A love so worn time shows through
we shared an oath with a kiss
our words sworn, rhymes of blue
this song of love I will miss
Now through the night my day ends
to search for truth in love new
a heart felt fight I see pends
on how I live life past you
Though the dark hides pain deep down
its in Love's tides rain I drown



© Copyright 2001 C. Thomas Owen - All Rights Reserved
Tracey
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since 2001-08-29
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where insanity meets breeding
1 posted 2001-10-23 01:27 AM


You have penned these feelings very well. I know, because I have felt them also. I could say time heals, but the jury's still out on that one

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

ctowen
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since 2001-10-18
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Green Mountains of VT
2 posted 2001-10-23 01:35 AM


Thank you Tracey ... sometimes we fear the verdict before the trial even begins.
I hope time finds you your answers and broadens that smile I know you so want to share ... especially in "Real-Land".
{ I'll take a bottle!!! )

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