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Communication |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada 
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Communication Eyes lock across the room, at first shy then returned, a message sent, received, the gaze that leaves heart burned A smile reaches eyes, acceptance in a glance, a look now understood, he leads her in the dance Arms embrace holding close, she breathes his essense in, sighing softly she melts for both of them will win A gentle kiss on lips that sends a signal clear, she moans from deep within, breathes a 'yes' in his ear She has a thought most strange of communication, neanderthal with it's harmful depravation Times have changed for the good, as men and women know, with gentle look and touch love for each other show Sighing with utmost joy she returns to sweet touch as heart to heart they dance not needing to say much Karen Torbiak© |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) The way loved ones communicate have certainly changed i time, but there is still sweetness that we all feel. (sigh) Such a wonderful lovely poem, sweet Karen, I remember this was a challenge that Wishmaster gave us! (big hugggssssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet star, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Startime, Things are much better, huh? And more sensual too. Good write.  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Some enchanted evening...you may see a stranger, across a crowded room" OH, I love this one!! It dances slowly down the page and smiles a wickedly sensual smile all the way. Enjoyed! ~Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Noah....I love the way that lovers communicate and I am so glad you like this poem. Larry C....Oh yes, much better....with plenty of sensual signals. Thank you for your comment.  Enchantress....wouldn't this be just a wonderfully wicked fantasy? Thank you so much, for your comment. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
interesting read startime...very well written. enjoyed the thoughts it gave me...now if i can find someone to share the moment with. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Alan....thank you. I am glad it gave you good thoughts. *grin* I am sure there are a number of ladies here who would love to share such a moment with you. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is a wonderful way to communicate. |
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