Open Poetry #16 |
My Curdling Halloween (repost) |
WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Made me a nervous wreck. The shreiks came out so eerily The hair stood on my neck. For two years straight I've heard that sound That stood my hair on end. And, when I walked home late tonight I heard it once again. Real scared, I stopped and looked around There's nothing I could see. A cold chill then ran up my spine There's something touching me. I froze there for a moment, then I quickly spun around. My knees were shaking terribly My voice would make no sound. I felt a cold and clammy hand Brush up against my face. But when I looked into the eyes There was a vacant space. Two gaping holes where eyes once were My blood froze in my veins. That's when I got a real good look At what's called Long John's brains. There was this green slime oozing out And dripping through his eyes. Those eerie shreiks I heard that night Were Long John's pitiful cries. [This message has been edited by WhtDove (edited 10-22-2001).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*giggling delightedly* I guess he can be pretty scary. I love this. It is perfect for halloween. BRAVO!!!! Now be careful where you go on Halloween....you never know what could happen. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Oh, my goodness, Dovie... you've given me the shivers! *G* That kitty kicking sailor is scary enough at best of times... but I didn't know he had brains??? *puzzled look* Enjoyed the poem... big hugs to both the poet and the good sport scalawag you wrote about. *S* |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
OH MY!!! Deb |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
LOL This was just as bone chillingly funny as it was last year |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
BBBBBOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO daciously funny yuh |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
totally enjoyed on this leaf strewn day around here! -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Misletoe thanks much. It was poking fun at Long John. I had a good time writing it. Part of it is true though. I'll leave that to you all to figure out. Heheehe Thanks Startime! Nope, one never does know. ROFL Ruth! I didn't know he did either. Love ya lady! Rex, thanks for enjoying it again. The Lady of Shallot, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for taking the time to read and respond. <*\\\>< |
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