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fulanodetal3684
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0 posted 2001-10-22 07:58 PM


from the center of nature(inside)
a point appears that has always been there
from the center of life(outside)
a point appears, that since then, has been there

from the center of oneself(inside)
a point appears that has always been there
from the center of the eyes(outside)
a point appears, that since then, has been there

You developed the inside
I manufactured the outside
You established the truth
I blended in perceptions
and came up with the word fool
which ain't wrong, but ain't right;
a blessing discovered documentation
which underlines, started fights...

well, the inside has always been a perfect circle
indivisable, unsimplifiable phenom
abstract spark of fire
while, the outside is the seed and light of science
frayed are its ends
we are to make them blend

and the linear rope is longer each time
as space persists in time,
till the circle is conceived from our insights
so that the outside melts with the inside
and both circles orbit the same,
parallel creatures of universal shrine;
then the days shall be days
and the nights shall be nights...

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1 posted 2001-10-22 08:02 PM


Like a circle of life your words flowed and blended to give us greater understanding of ourselves. Very interesting poem. Welcome to passions. You will find the poets here are the best and most loving to be found on the net.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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