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The Unknown |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT 
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The Unknown The stillness of silence can be very unsettling, no movement, no voice, just a moment of time that appears to be frozen yet continuing forever forward. And in its mist lives the unforgiven, the accused, and the punished, searching for the very thing that torments them. It will be their only escape from themselves. As their souls cry out in vain the silence will be broken and so will the cold stillness that surrounds what remains. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
The unknown can be a very scarey thing C. You capture that feeling well. Nice write.  On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
As their souls cry out in vain the silence will be broken and so will the cold stillness that surrounds what remains. absolutely beautiful... ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This is GREAT ctowen... especially loved the opening stanza! Maree |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very deep thoughts, and I find them to be true for me. Nice write. Sandra |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ctowen, Well thought out and well delivered. Enjoyed |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Gentle Spirit - thanks, yes very much so. Wynter - I am pleased that you liked this I always look forward to your comments. D Angel - Thank you, I will try to continue. Sandra - My deepest thoughts are with you. Thanks for your comments. Seymour - "Well,well ..." thank you, I am glad you enjoyed. |
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