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catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2001-10-22 12:21 PM


Yes, it is true, you still arrive
with ribbons tying up my heart
no matter what intentions are
I just don't want to be apart.

Tis said I have to love myself
before the day you ever will
but need for you is ever strong
I swear, I'll never have my fill.

It's naught that I am empty in
and must have you to fill the void
but when I hold you close to me
my heart is full of boundless joy.

I lay here with your feel inside
but you have gone back to your home
I miss you, wanting so much more
my heart with you, no wish to roam.

Oh fool that I could love so much
a man who loves just part of me
yet miracles may happen yet
the two of us, are someday we.

© Copyright 2001 Sandra - All Rights Reserved
Sven
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1 posted 2001-10-22 12:26 PM


you said it yourself Sandra. . . the best place to begin, is with yourself. . .  love yourself. . . and love sees. . .

I can feel the longing in this one . . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Logan
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2 posted 2001-10-22 12:57 PM


Ahh, Sandra, very gentle smile. To look down the road with belief is part of how we are, so continue to do so with a smile. Very nice write
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3 posted 2001-10-22 01:04 PM


I wish you well, my friend.  Nice work, as always. *hugs*

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.  

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4 posted 2001-10-22 01:32 PM


Sandra,

I can feel your pain in every word here. *hugs*

                                   Dawn

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5 posted 2001-10-22 02:04 PM


Maybe fate will be on your side Sandra..nicely done..

                           ~Victoria~

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6 posted 2001-10-22 02:27 PM


Sandra, there is always a time when it is "our time"  May this be YOUR time.  Wonderful write.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

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Deep in the heart
7 posted 2001-10-22 02:30 PM


when will we be one
it plays on my mind each day
one and one is we

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

ctowen
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8 posted 2001-10-22 03:18 PM


"The message here is quite clear,
the heart of me needs you near
not to replace any parts
but turn one into the two of hearts."

The answer you maybe looking for is blowing in the wind that softly caresses those ribbons in your hair.

A beautiful and heartfilled message!!!
One worthy of holding!!

MyEnchanted_Melody
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across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
9 posted 2001-10-22 04:41 PM




Yes, it is true, you still arrive
with ribbons tying up my heart
no matter what intentions are
I just don't want to be apart.

Tis said I have to love myself
before the day you ever will
but need for you is ever strong
I swear, I'll never have my fill.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Such a beautiful outpouring of the heart, Sandra...

I hope he'd get the message all too clear...

Thank you
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Enchantress
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10 posted 2001-10-22 04:49 PM


Lovely but sad song Sandra...well said.  ~Nancy~

  ~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

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11 posted 2001-10-22 07:29 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Sandra, this is sad but soooooo beautiful and I know that this miracle will happen for you; for your beautiful heart is bound to melt the heart of your dreams! (sigh) You always deserve the most beautiful love of all, and I know you will find it! (big hugggsssss) God Bless You, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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