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nona
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since 2000-03-03
Posts 139
Fla

0 posted 2001-10-22 11:07 AM



I had a magic pencil
that use to serve me well
but now I've gone and lost it
and my writing's gone to hell.

The words no longer flow for me
out across the page, it sends me
smack into a friggen rage.

I stare for hours at the totally
blank page, where once I would be
filling, with many a wonderous phrase.
Now I set and stare as if I'm in a daze.

I hope I find my magic pencil soon
cause the one that I am using  just flat
quit and here I set in a friggin haze.

I have so many phrases running round
my head. I'm almost out of room to store them
and some are growing dim.

They're crammed in there like cord wood
with no place to go. I work for hours without
a thing to show.

Until I find my magic pencil this is all I
have to say. Guess I'll just keep trying till
I find the one that works, and takes away this
phase................nona  

© Copyright 2001 Nona-Madonna Neumann - All Rights Reserved
arthur
Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678
england
1 posted 2001-10-22 11:44 AM


I know the feeling only to well
i have tried self disipline
that works -a bit
you get something which is usuable
But not worth a dime
i find just dreaming is best
try and just switch off completely
just relax
and wait for what you need
just one strong image
then you have it
the word bashing is easy
but a good image is hard to find
so stop looking and dream
arthur

cpalmer
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since 2001-06-26
Posts 977
Phoenix, Az
2 posted 2001-10-22 12:27 PM


I be looking for that pencil
so you can get back in the game
your writing is important
not something to be tamed
Look under your bed, around your house
I'm sure it will turn up
I'll keep an eye out for you
Hey maybe it's in a cup!
I've been there dear poet friend
it will come home soon
Just sit back and look around
You might just here the tune
Goodluck! This was very good by the way!
Hugs
Cindi

DawnG
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since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494
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3 posted 2001-10-22 01:10 PM


Nona,

I had to laugh as I was reading this cause I too have a special pencil that I have to use to write my poetry. Unfortunately I had to choose one that was 3/4 of the way gone so I have no idea what will happen when I've sharpened it to a stub. Hope you find your pencil soon.

                                   Dawn

BrightStar
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since 2001-04-08
Posts 219

4 posted 2001-10-23 12:43 PM


Bumpy road.

Admiring you at Passions.

nona
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since 2000-03-03
Posts 139
Fla
5 posted 2001-10-23 02:31 PM


I knew that all in here could relate to this. So many phrases going round in my head and I am out of lead hehe...Thanks your validation of my feelings.......nona
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