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SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23
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On A Journey To The Unknown

0 posted 2001-10-21 07:20 PM


Thrown against the wall
Couldn’t help but fall

Beaten black and blue
This was nothing new

Smothered with a pillow
Until there was no glow

Choked until I turned blue
It was then that I knew

That I just couldn’t stay
Somehow I’d find a way

To get away from you
And, I finally did, too

Memories never go away
Seems they always stay
© By Sue 10/19/01


I got out of this 28 years ago. But, something recently happened, that broght these memories back.
Stronger than before. These memories never completely go away.

© Copyright 2001 Sue Graves - All Rights Reserved
Logan
Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641
Arkansas
1 posted 2001-10-21 07:41 PM


No, they never go away, but your nick alone tells the story, Smart Chick, and yes, you are to have gotten out of the situation that marks for life, but to know, I CAN overcome, I AM strong enough..Hey, kid, I am all for you..very gentle smile
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since 2000-12-17
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2 posted 2001-10-21 08:19 PM




(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh sweet Sue, I am so so sorry you had to go through all of this; this poem about broke my heart reading it. (wipes tears) You are a very loving person and my heart cries out to you that you had to endure such abuse. (sad sigh) My heart is always with you, and we all love you so very very much! I pray that the greatest joy can heal these memories and bring anew many new joyful ones. (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend! A very sad but well-written poem! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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