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walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-10-21 05:45 PM

My soul
saddened
my abandonment
from the self
dwells
detached
cannot find
any connection
inside
I try
but can't
Sometimes I need
that solitude
of heart
Lingering feelings
that hang out
waiting for
the chance to
attack
Defensively
I hide from
that part of me
that loves you
still
It's too much
You, my soul and me

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

1 posted 2001-10-21 05:49 PM

It sounds like you are having an internal battle with yourself. I hope the best of you wins. Very well written poem. I know these kinds of feelings well.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2001-10-21 08:39 PM

Defensively
I hide from
that part of me
that loves you
still
It's too much
You, my soul and me

I can understand these feelings..sometimes I try my best to hide from love...but it always shows its face. *s

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2001-10-21 08:44 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Walker, this is so so sad and my heart goes out to you! (sad sigh) I pray that in the end you win the battle and feel the true love your golden heart deserves! (sigh) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walker, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

4 posted 2001-10-21 09:02 PM

You said it about as perfectly as it can be said. Sometimes it seems that it is all we are left with. Good write. *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

Tracey
Member Elite

since 2001-08-29

Posts 2808
where insanity meets breeding

5 posted 2001-10-21 09:07 PM

Heartfelt words that are penned so beautifully. I have been there, I'm sure many of us have, and know exactly what you're speaking of

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

A Whisper's Caress
Senior Member

since 2000-11-03

Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale

6 posted 2001-10-22 04:45 PM

Defensively
I hide from
that part of me
that loves you
still
It's too much
You, my soul and me

I have spent the day on the verge of tears.
Your beautiful heart allowing such tenderness....thank you....

Poetic verse nestled in the warmth of my heart, reveals the sweet yearnings of my soul....

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

7 posted 2001-10-22 05:06 PM

It's too much
You, my soul and me

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Indeed , it's too much...and you have expressed that raging battle between the three so well....and quietly sad.

Thank you
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