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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2001-10-21 12:21 PM



She rides a tall horse, wind in the willows,

gallops bareback 'round papery birch

on a velvety chocolate dream horse named Jake,

and only the swift red fox and the ebony raven

see the glowing smile upon her lips

as her body glides in rhythm,

movement of hips in tune.

Confirmation of conformation.

Happy Birthday
to my daughter SARA
age 14, Oct 20, 2001  

© Copyright 2001 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
Tracey
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1 posted 2001-10-21 12:27 PM


A lovely poem for your daughter Kacy.

Happy Birthday Sara
Happy Birthday to you
May your smiles always be bright
And your days be filled with sunlight

(I guess she's too young to have a party with beer and stuff huh Kacy? so I'll keep it tame!! LOL)

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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2 posted 2001-10-21 12:28 PM


Happy Birthday Sara!!  
14 is a awesome year!  
enjoy!!  

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3 posted 2001-10-21 02:02 AM


Tracey and SEA, thanks! I just showed this to Sara, she smiled and said thanks!
Thanks from me, too.

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4 posted 2001-10-21 02:04 PM


Happy Birthday Sara,
Happy Birthday to you,
Oh to be 14 like you,
And look that good too!

Wow, you're half way to 28!  

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5 posted 2001-10-21 02:07 PM


Very nice poem, and Happy birthday to Sara from me, too.
Sandra

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6 posted 2001-10-21 02:07 PM


LOL, Larry. And I am halfway to..never mind.
Sara says THANKS!

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7 posted 2001-10-21 02:10 PM


Cat, Sara says THANKS. She really does ride a thoroughbred named Jake, but it's below freezing here now, so she didn't get the birthday ride except in her dreams.
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8 posted 2001-10-21 02:19 PM


Happy birthday, Sara.    You have such a pretty name, by the way.  It's always been one of my favorites.  Tell mom to start shopping around for that car you'll be wanting in the next couple of years.    Nice work, Kacy.

Michael

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9 posted 2001-10-21 02:36 PM


Happy Birthday, Sara~


Delightful poem, Mom~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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10 posted 2001-10-21 03:05 PM


What a perfect birthday poem.  Happy birthday, Sara!
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11 posted 2001-10-21 03:23 PM


Michael, Marge, Duncan  THANKS  
Marge, thanks for the galloping horse and filly   Sara says it's  
Sara is enjoying all these Birthday wishes. LOL Michael, she says she better find a job to pay for the insurance....smart girl.
Duncan, thanks for your presence.

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12 posted 2001-10-21 04:04 PM


how lovely, Happy Birthday to your daughter!

-befriend yourself and you will never be alone-

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13 posted 2001-10-21 04:09 PM


Gorgeous imagery! I remember the first time I saw my daughter on a horse, and this brings back all that joy.
Happy Birthday, Sara!

"I am nae poet, in a sense;
But just a rhymer like by chance..."
-Robert Burns

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14 posted 2001-10-21 04:39 PM


~* Happy Birthday Sara *~

I bet Jake dreams of you riding him too
as he patiently waits over the winter,
and can't wait until Spring  


~* Have A Wonderful Birthday *~

Try giving your smile to someone who does not have one, and I bet you'll find another ~*~ Mysteria ~*~

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15 posted 2001-10-21 05:04 PM


OMG, you guys are awesome. Lady, abigail, mysteria, THANK YOU. We are both enjoying the messages, the pictures, and the Birthday tunes.  
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