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Honeybee
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0 posted 2001-10-20 11:40 PM


This has been moved to the Adult Forum.


© Copyright 2001 Melissa P. Long-Monette - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-10-20 11:56 PM




(smiles) Such a beautiful sensual kiss indeed! (big hugggsssssss) Licking honey from the lips, blushing butterflies against the chest, sooooooo beautiful! (sigh) You always write of the sweetest kisses, sweet Melissa, makes me think of kissing my dream girl all the time! Mmmmmmmmm! (big hugggssssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Melissa, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton



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2 posted 2001-10-20 11:58 PM


Melissa....whew, very sensual, and a bit erotic....this may end up in Adult   at any rate, this is gorgeous  

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Tracey
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3 posted 2001-10-21 12:03 PM


Whew, Melissa, ya got my heart racing there!!! This is a gorgeously sensual and romantic piece. Now I'm off for a cold shower. LOL

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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4 posted 2001-10-21 12:46 PM


blush butterflies across my cheek,
fly my whispers to passion's peak,
send shivers down my spine...
stop the rush of time,
lose yourself in the glint of my eyes ~
sway with my soul,
caress my breath, never let go,
for, a kiss is not just a kiss
when fate is intertwined
when ecstasy is graced
by your heart and mine
==================================

have mercy girlie...
me thinks ya been in me raspberry tea  
very very nice Melis...
we all wish to know this kiss  
Beautiful inspire here.

This distance has shown how the road remains alone
Now I'm looking in my life ... for a truth that is my own.

ellie LeJeune
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5 posted 2001-10-21 09:31 AM


Oh, WOW! Melissa the Man who captures your heart is going to have a big smile on his face twenty four hours a day!!!!Love ya! Ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2001-10-21 09:58 AM


Melissa,
Hot stuff, you almost brought me back to life
LOL a wonderful write.

inot2B
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7 posted 2001-10-21 12:10 PM


My husband dragged me out of the shower to read this.
Wow,
words can't say how much I enjoyed your poem.

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8 posted 2001-10-21 02:03 PM


So beautiful Melissa, what a romantic soul you have.
Sandra

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9 posted 2001-10-21 06:23 PM


the Queen of Romance pens yet another poem of Passion and Fire. . .

you know that I love this one. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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10 posted 2001-10-21 06:50 PM


Whooo Hoooo!  Sensual poem there Melissa, and I am laughing myself silly at JM (rasberry tea!), is that like Long Island Ice Tea - now you're talking!

Try giving your smile to someone who does not have one, and I bet you'll find another ~*~ Mysteria ~*~

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11 posted 2001-10-21 07:18 PM


"with the taste of rapture's dew"

Ahhhhh to be kissed like this is heavenly indeed!

I am sooooo glad I did not miss this one...excellent write!!!

I love it!

Honeybee
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12 posted 2001-10-21 10:38 PM



Thanks everyone!  

I've certainly been on a kiss fetish this last week, haven't I?    

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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13 posted 2001-10-22 12:46 PM


missy,

This is so hot, girl!
I now have a fav of
yours! great stuff...

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14 posted 2001-10-22 07:21 AM


Melissa,

   Wow chickie!  What a way to jumpstart my morning! So romanitic and erotic! The man who inspired this isn't going to know what hit him .  Wonderful write

Hugs,
Tara

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ethome
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15 posted 2001-10-22 07:24 AM


You little Deviless you! What are ya trying to do to us all?
Whew this is going to carry the mood of passion and sensuousness into the minds of all the readers!  Great pictures, but even more so well written!

Honeybee
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16 posted 2001-10-22 11:58 AM



Me a lil'  ?  and I thought I was the posterchild for innocence  
hehehe

Thanks Chels, Tara and Eric for your replies~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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