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Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

0 posted 2001-10-20 07:33 PM

  I was teetering
   on the brink
     of forgetfulness
       Until you swept me
          off my feet
              and
               I was kidnapped
                   by love's recall.

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

1 posted 2001-10-20 07:38 PM

Now that is something I would love. To be swept off my feet. It would sure give me something to be happy about. You say it very well. I am so glad that you were on the brink and then he came along and swept you off your feet. Perfectly wonderful and very romantic.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2001-10-20 07:39 PM

mmmm sweet memories

this is fantastic

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2001-10-20 07:54 PM

Nightshade,
Short and to the point. Enjoyed

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2001-10-20 08:08 PM

YES!! Don't ya just love it?...being swept off your feet...gee Chris.

This is so well done. I can just picture this happening and you taking off together on the back of 'distant thunder'

Love ya, Teed.

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

5 posted 2001-10-20 08:25 PM

Startime - may this happen for you sometime. Thanks, Chris
SEA - Thankyou so much.
Seymour Tabin - I am glad you enjoyed.
NancyLee - I knew that you would picture us "in the wind." hugs, Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Rex Allen McCoy
Member Elite

since 2000-01-30

Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London

6 posted 2001-10-20 09:21 PM

If only each day could start this way
Lovely thoughts Chris

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

7 posted 2001-10-20 09:47 PM

Rex - I am so glad you liked this. Thanks for reading. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Nature Girl
Junior Member

since 2001-10-19

Posts 31

8 posted 2001-10-21 05:02 PM

Simple and endearing. Lovely!

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

9 posted 2001-10-21 06:23 PM

nature girl, Thankyou for your comments and I am glad you liked it.

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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