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Mr. Fetherall's Advice....Bronte 7
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Mr. Fetherall's Advice....Bronte 7 |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee 
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With trembling hands and chills Out the door she flew Whirling the staircase flat Breathlessly streaking down the street Pushing the deli door open Flinging shop bells in a fury She confronted Mr. Fetherall Barely able to squeeze a sentence “Did you...send me flowers? I received...the sweet rolls This morning..early..Thank you Flowers...Lilies...White? Mr. Fetherall wiped his hands On apron and came round counter To greet her...steady her He could sense her shaken soul “My child...I’m sorry..No Flowers I just thought you’d love a treat I wanted to wake you with gift The sweetest morn I have to render” She exhaled in uneasy confusion Unfolding in the comfort of his voice Gently, he began to understand The mysterious floral fancy “You know...I’ve known you Since a tiny child, And your Mother She was the most beautiful flower Even though she abides among the Saints” “Her spirit dwells Amaranthine In you... Please do not close Your passion flower to the world Someone desires to witness your bloom” “The Angels are smiling on you Bronte..Your walls must come down. Climb them as your Mother did As the wildest Rose of Ireland!” Tearful hugs in departing His graceful offering remained the deepest well of her day She dipped in and out of his wish |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yes, and someone will witness her bloom indeed! (big hugggssssss) Oh Regina, your beautiful words never cease to amaze and inspire me! (smiles) You to us all are such that beautiful lily! (big hugggsssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Regina, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Regina....you are doing very well with the series.... more, please... |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
BRAVO!!!BRAVO!!!Oh I love it.....Magnificent. More please. I get lost in the reading of them. Thank you, so much, for sharing them.  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Rwood, A very nice write, enjoyed |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Regina, I graciously give comments... Accept these.... this was awesome....a very tender and so beautiful a poem. It may not have been flowers, but it certainly was so nice. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Wow, I can see I have missed a lot over the past week away from the forum. This is wonderful, and I have to look for the rest now  Sandra |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
*sigh* Lovely, lovely, lovely. This series is so enchanting. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
your series is seriously interestng o yuh |
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WRBreezin Member
since 2001-08-04
Posts 212 |
Regina, the eighth and closing stanzas standout for me, as the intrigue of "Bronte" continues. Willie B [This message has been edited by WRBreezin (edited 10-21-2001).] |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Noah: I thank you for your beautiful reply. I'm so happy to bloom with you any day. Sunshine: Thank you Poetess!!! You are so good to me. Hugs! Karen: Wow! Thanks for the double Bravo! I'll do my best for you all. Hugs!!! Seymour: So glad you visited Bronte today. It brightened "our" day! Magnus: You are very gracious and kind to me! Many thanks for reading!!! Stay tuned Catalinamoon: Just what I've been missing...a little fire in my day! Where ya been Miss Poetess? Your spirit is needed! Tracey: Thanxxx!! From a Lovey Gal! I appreciate you!!! Walty: So glad I'm interesting you! Thanks for the encouragement! Willie: Thank you for hanging in there with me. I am striving to make it worth your while! Hugs! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
you're walking with her in your dreams aren't you??  I feel that there will be more indeed my friend. . . for she has much to say. . . and you are her voice. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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