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wayoutwalt
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TEXAS (it's all big)

0 posted 2001-10-21 04:04 PM



His wife promised a minute of peace
So obligingly he came to bed
She held him near and kissed his lips
But so many rhymes were in his head

One… one thousand… two… one thousand… three one thousand… four
And when he got to sixty counts he ran right out the door


[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 10-21-2001).]

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Abigaile
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1 posted 2001-10-21 04:17 PM


Ahh, know the feelings oh so well. Many a night have I felt the need to write more consuming than the need for the bed.

"I am nae poet, in a sense;
But just a rhymer like by chance..."
-Robert Burns

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Canada eh.
2 posted 2001-10-21 04:49 PM


Walt...me thinks you are on a roll!!  
Smiles, Nancy.

  ~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Larry C
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3 posted 2001-10-21 04:58 PM


Walt,
Does that make our wives poet widows? LOL  Looks like a confession to me!  

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4 posted 2001-10-21 04:58 PM


Yuh, I would be divorced by now...good thing I am alone LOL, been here for sure.
Dark Angel
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5 posted 2001-10-21 05:22 PM


Go Walty Go! You're definitley on a roll!  

Maree

wayoutwalt
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6 posted 2001-10-21 05:28 PM


I need a hotline to call!
cruz
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7 posted 2001-10-21 08:28 PM


just how can you run from being held and kissed. hehehe.  not goodnigt but goodwrite!
Denise
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8 posted 2001-10-21 08:34 PM


ROFL    I can totally relate! Good one, Walt!
Tracey
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9 posted 2001-10-21 09:43 PM


Boy, you've just got a ton of thoughts in your head the last couple days haven't you I know what you mean, many times I've gone to bed, then have to get up again cause words are spinning round my head. And if you don't write them straight away, they're lost forever

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

nakdthoughts
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10 posted 2001-10-22 10:26 AM


Stupid is as stupid does..didn't I hear that somewhere........

Well at least you had a tender kiss...before the count *s

~Wynter (walking in the forest)

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



catalinamoon
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11 posted 2001-10-22 12:10 PM


Very good one, Walt  
Sandra

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12 posted 2001-10-22 02:14 PM



Nope.  Obsessed, maybe, but not stupid.

elisaseyes
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13 posted 2001-10-22 07:01 PM


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