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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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I'm praying on my fingertips that they find the words of lips I'm mouthing prayer from brain to heart-- stone to flint in fire's spark-- my heart is dancing pirhouette-- rebirth of me within my chest! I am, I am, so uncontained... you touched me, I'm forever changed. Your lips are liquid wax in melt upon my breast, forever dwelt, a tongue a touch of silken sable writhing written, lovely fable... Cursing corners, damn the winds... damn the author--wrote us "friends"-- and damn the space between our touch-- a millimeter is too much... I want, I need to inhale you I need, I want you say it too... Let me cradle your sweet head as you nibble on my breast moaning kisses on your brow downy drift in drip of down. All about you, is surprise. Edges sharp were but disguise-- thorns in growth protecting rose-- and chiseled glass strewn on the road- mere distraction, warts on toad... I kiss you anyway. I KNOW. I'd say I love you beyond death. But one does not adore one's breath. Just like the air from my first cry-- With you? There was no need to try. I'll chart the notes of every sigh and write the dirges of goodbye-- I'll pray for days so simple, planned, we walk the streets hand held in hand... I love you, love you, love you (twirl) I feel like I'm a brand new girl Love me? love me, love me (swirl?) Kiss goodbye a dismal world. I'll buy your brushes, mix your paint and pose for you without restraint, and you shall be my mental math-- you suffer patiently my wrath-- You are the ink upon my quill-- my soul's discovery of "still"... Your arms diminish my forlorn. Your arms around me silence storms. You frighten me. Make me believe. I want the fairytale. Don't leave? |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I am, I am, so uncontained... you touched me, I'm forever changed. Your lips are liquid wax in melt upon my breast, forever dwelt, a tongue a touch of silken sable writhing written, lovely fable... Cursing corners, damn the winds... damn the author--wrote us "friends"-- and damn the space between our touch-- a millimeter is too much... I want, I need to inhale you I need, I want you say it too... Let me cradle your sweet head as you nibble on my breast moaning kisses on your brow downy drift in drip of down. =================================== I'd say I love you beyond death. But one does not adore one's breath. Just like the air from my first cry-- With you? There was no need to try. I'll chart the notes of every sigh and write the dirges of goodbye-- I'll pray for days so simple, planned, we walk the streets hand held in hand... I love you, love you, love you (twirl) I feel like I'm a brand new girl Love me? love me, love me (swirl?) Kiss goodbye a dismal world. I'll buy your brushes, mix your paint and pose for you without restraint, and you shall be my mental math-- you suffer patiently my wrath-- You are the ink upon my quill-- my soul's discovery of "still"... ======================================== WOO HOO Good morning girlie *wink* My goodness we are WELL inspired!! (does he have a brother???)  Damn baby...this poem ROCKS!!! I am sighing and holding my breath after reading this beauty... you took the longing, the anticipation and the ache and wrapped them in rhyme divine (and you danced) *S* Me thinks this one should come with pretty blue flame warnings ... or flame proof mascara ...  perfect poetry me twin mothy me This distance has shown how the road remains alone |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Mmmmmmm...a beautiful warm passionate read for the morning! (smiles) Your beautiful heart shines across these romantic sentiments, sweet Karen! (big hugggssssss) I love it! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet serenity, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Wow Serenity, some individual has tripped your love trigger and wound your clock.... Because you are cooking with Dynomite.... |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Lots of energy here, a mood on the upswing. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
WOW!!!Incredibly sensual and filled with love. It sure looks like your heart has been touched deeply. Very powerful read. I LOVE IT!!!  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh HOW do you keep doing this to me..Write exactly, exactly what I am feeling. Are we living parallel lives? I hope yours comes out better than mine.. Awesome, spectacularly romantic, whimsical, sexy, you have it all here. Sandra |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Karen, This is some of the best writing of yours that I've been privileged to read. Incredible, amazing, just wonderful! Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Oh Wow. This is an absolutely amazing piece. I am fast becoming a major fan of your writing. This just screamed out at me. I too have felt this, but I have never been able to write it as well as you do. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Oops, when you want it in your library, you have to hit the button Tracey!!! LOL |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
WOW !!!! This is a heart pumper ... definite "ink to the quill" !! Excellent!!! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
My Twin---you take me beyond words, because I know you understand me so well. Even thank you won't do...I love you my sister. Hugs? YEP. HUGS. Noah...it's been said that we see in each other, mirrors of ourselve...and it's YOU, that has the beautiful shining heart! My most gracious gratitude to you. Magnus? Methinks he wound my clock and THEN tripped my love trigger (gawd I LOVE that) and yes, it's like shelter from the storm...thank you my friend. RS....I hope you are right...I would love to write happy more often! Thank you for reading! Startime, what a sweetheart you have been, and I thank you so much for your kindness. Every sweet reply these days is like rain in the desert.... Oh Sandra...for your sake? I hope we are NOT living paralell lives...sigh. I pray for you yanno. You deserve to smile often and widely. Love to you, sweet one. Michael, you are my dear friend, and if this were the mafia? You would know enough about me to be in danger---*wink* Thank you my friend. You ARE loved. Tracey? Laughing here..."you have to hit the button?" NOPE. Try the "love trigger"....  (am I bad? I YAM.) winks and thank yous!ct---you are new to me...I'm afraid I have missed your debut...my apologies, and WELCOME. Thank you for reading and trust that I will be looking for your work as well.... And thanks to all for continuing to read while I flooded the forum of late. Must have something to do with my "love trigger" being tripped....(gawd, Mag, you have started something there....grin) |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Karen, a hushed WOW! I love the passion in this poem incredible 'O Gorgeous one! Maree |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Whew! All this, and probably the fireflies flickering around you too. Burning up the pages, you are, and casting spells upon the land with the magical quill of serenity. |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
well, let my reply be a soft rain drop upon your poetic talents! -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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