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Open Poetry #16

My weakness

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-10-19 09:34 PM

This desire
I escape
constantly
Now I give in
I want to be with you
I want to be in you
I want to be you
Love's like that
I know
it burns a whole in my soul
constantly
reminding me of my
vulnerability
My weakness
being you
My weakness
being me
I can't let go
You're part of me
my love

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

1 posted 2001-10-19 09:37 PM

*sigh* a romantic message to the lady of your dreams. Absolutely beautiful.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2001-10-19 09:46 PM

(sigh) Oh my gosh, this is soooooo beautiful! (big hugggsssssss) Your love for her shines so angelically, and she too never wants to let go of your golden heart! (smiles) So sweet and lovely, dearest friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet walker, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2001-10-19 09:54 PM

Beautiful romantic write....enjoyed!
~hugs, NancyLee~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

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