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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 Romantic Moods By: Noah Eaton 10/19/01 Carried off in a pair of glossy wings You wear the moonlight and the stars as lingerie Slide your veil from your cashmere face So I can hear your love hum through my veins Stroke your hair slowly, drag your fingers down your neck Gently I will kiss it, soft and tender On Eros' unicorn ride, we'll soar off to paradise Just lean beside me, we'll soar to loves sweet surrender Rest your head over these cotton castles of your dreams I'll kiss your lips like a prince, you are my queen Caressing the ribbons in your hair, the softness of your skin Castaways in ecstacy, sharing our greatest dream Speak softly to my ear as the sun rises I'll whisper to you, my dear, as the sun begins to sleep Let's make love to each other in these Romantic Moods we share Lay down beside me and dream with me... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
speaking of romance..*s...nicely done, Noah. Thank you for all your support and kind words. You are greatly appreciated. ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Noah, you sure are a romantic soul!! Enjoyed...~Hugs, Nancy~
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Wonderfully romantic, Noah. Well done.  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Very romantic mood, great poem. |
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OctoberSky Junior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 12 |
Softly long before you miss me" can not remember who sings that, Elvis?? anyway I find this a excellent write with so many great emotions btw that song came to mind as I read tis, its one of my favorite songs anyway, nice poem |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Wynter: Thank you so so much; you are always such a joy to me, as well as your sweet words Nancy: (blushes) Awwwwww...you're so so sweet! You are an angel to us all, and you always write love too so wonderfully! (smiles Karen: Thank you so much! (big hugggssssss) How has Erin been? Tell her I said Hi, and god bless you this evening! Walker: Yep-yep-yep, I've been daydreaming of love a lot today and got this thought to mind! (smiles) Thank you so much, and have a beautiful evening! OctoberSky: Wow, I think Elvis does sing that song, oh dear, I can't remember the name of it! :-( But I've heard those lyrics, and I'm so glad you liked this! I like Elvis, and my favorite bands are Matchbox Twenty, Train, R.E.M, and Dave Matthews. (big hugggssssss) Have a beautiful evening! May love and alight always shine upon all of you! Love, Noah Eaton (Singing Sparrow) |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Ah, this is so beautifully romantic. You wear the moonlight and the stars as lingerie That is indeed a particularly beautiful piece of imagery. The whole piece is beautiful, but that line just stands out If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Noah, You have one of the most sweetest and romantic hearts I've ever seen. Thank you for sharing What a nice way to start my day. *hugs*Tara Don't marry for money... You can borrow it cheaper! [This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (edited 10-20-2001).] |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Noah - A'hhh, many words of romance I read in your writing. Many emotions you have expressed. Well done Noah, keep these coming... Bc |
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Domzi Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 288New York (BK) |
This poem is sooo romantic! |
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