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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2001-10-19 07:04 PM



Arousal Of The Day
~*Marge Tindal*~

O' I would race the sun across the morning
to dance in rays within your smile
Stretch in yawn upon the dawn
to hold you for a while~

Roll so gently in your waking
holding, giving, taking
Arousal of the day
making sure you smiled~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
   noles1@totcon.com              

© Copyright 2001 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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1 posted 2001-10-19 07:06 PM


You never know when someone needs a good smile...James
Dark Angel
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2 posted 2001-10-19 07:07 PM


Ohhhh Lordy! Very sensual!

Love it!

Maree  

Martie
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3 posted 2001-10-19 07:13 PM


My goodness woman, you certainly know how to turn a phrase!  
Titia Geertman
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4 posted 2001-10-19 07:15 PM


That's one hell of a sweet verse

Titia

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5 posted 2001-10-19 08:22 PM


WOW!!!!  Marge!!  Now that is a sexy little ditty!  
You can tell the weekend is upon us.
Love ya!  Nancy.  


  ~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

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6 posted 2001-10-19 08:26 PM


simply ssssssssensual...thanx
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7 posted 2001-10-19 09:03 PM


  YEEEEEEEHAW  MARGE
MY SMILE IS FROM EAR TO EAR
BLESS YOU FOR MY AROUSAL

forever and forever
   hugs
warrior

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8 posted 2001-10-19 09:11 PM




(winks) Such a clever sexy verse indeed! (smiles) You always write such beautiful and versatile visions and poetry that inspire and arouse us all! (big hugggsssssss) I love it! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marge, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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9 posted 2001-10-19 10:41 PM


JamesMichael~
True ... yes ...  

DarkAngel~
Thank you~

Martie~
*smiles*

Titia~
Goodness !

Enchantress~
The weekend ? ?
Hmmmm, hadn't noticed~

Magnus~
Thank you~

SoaringEagle~
Tee-Hee !  My pleasure~
*Hugs*

Noah~
Thank you~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
   noles1@totcon.com              

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10 posted 2001-10-19 11:25 PM


Marge:  Very provocative to say the least! You are full of surprises! Lucky for us!

Betty Lou Hebert

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11 posted 2001-10-19 11:31 PM


BettyLou~
Tee-Hee !
I tried it with a sunrise graphic - honest Injun~
Somehow it just didn't work~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
   noles1@totcon.com              

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12 posted 2001-10-20 12:11 PM


What a lovely romantic verse. Simply beautiful.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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13 posted 2001-10-20 10:39 AM


WOW!!!What a way for anyone to start the day. BRAVO!!!!Marge you have done it agin. Sensually stunning.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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14 posted 2001-10-20 10:57 AM


~You have a spark about you that I love Marge. This and you, were great to read this morning. *Peace.
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15 posted 2001-10-20 01:39 PM


Tracey~
Thanks bunches~

StarTime~
Grinning cause you enjoyed it~

SpitFire~
Thanks gal. Appreciate it~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
   noles1@totcon.com              

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16 posted 2001-10-20 07:21 PM


Well Marge, seems to me you have just done us red heads a huge favour  
Loved it.

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life.     a brand

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17 posted 2001-10-20 09:45 PM


I have a friend that is always reminding me to smile. You never know when your smile will catch the eye of someone special.

                                     Dawn

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18 posted 2001-10-21 12:00 PM


Dee~
I'd say I did the redhead's mate a favor~
Tee-Hee !

Dawn~
Yeah ... oh, yeah~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
   noles1@totcon.com              

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19 posted 2001-10-26 04:31 AM



Marge-
   All I can say it 'wow'!
   I'm loving this red hot little write.
   Seems quite appropriate that it be
   bumped up this morning too...LOL!
   Love ya,
   ~Vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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20 posted 2001-10-26 09:17 AM


why not race the moon
across the cool midnight sky
then arouse the sun

Let thy moon arise.  William Blake

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21 posted 2001-10-26 09:56 AM


This is very good. I love it.
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22 posted 2001-10-26 10:48 AM


*giggle* PERFECT!

"I am nae poet, in a sense;
But just a rhymer like by chance..."
-Robert Burns

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23 posted 2001-10-26 12:12 PM



Marge~ What a wonderful way to start the day!   You have made me smile!

Hugs,
~Krista

Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

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24 posted 2001-10-26 02:10 PM


hmmm...Marge did you get that email with my home addy on it?  ...lol...

Lets Love one another-let God do the worrying,
Rodney

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25 posted 2001-10-26 02:43 PM


Marge - Wow, this one took me by surprise!!  Quite a sexy little entry. Chris  

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

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26 posted 2001-10-26 02:54 PM


Vicky~
Very perceptive, young lady~
You know there's at least two of us grinning here~

LunaTic~
LOL~  Did that as a blonde~

SmartChick~
Thanks, hon~

Abigaile~
Well, thank you very much~

SmittenKitten~
Thankee ... kinda grinning myself~

Rodney~
LOL !
Thanks for the reply~

*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
   noles1@totcon.com              

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27 posted 2001-10-26 03:01 PM


NightShade~
Whoops !
Didn't see you tucked away on page 2.
Thank you very much~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
   noles1@totcon.com              

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28 posted 2001-10-26 09:07 PM


Ohhhh, do I know this feeling...you must have read my mind...great write, Marge!

sp  

And did you know with the rain in your pockets,
you can change the weather...

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29 posted 2001-10-28 12:05 PM


SnowPants~
NOW I just LOVE the smile on our Maga's face~
Thanks gal~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
   noles1@totcon.com              

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