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Suetang
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0 posted 2001-10-19 06:57 PM


You are as welcome as the sunshine
After a dark and rainy night
You're like a breath of fresh air
Such a wonderful sight

Half of me is sometimes missing
Whenever you're not around
How very blessed am I
For this special love I've found

A pair of star-crossed lovers
Here we walk along the sand
As you stop and turn to kiss me
And our feet sink into the sand

In your arms I so easily surrender
As I feel the tenderness of your touch
The hours that I spend with you
They never seem to be enough

A day without your love
And my heart seems to lose its way
Within the comfort of your loving arms
Is where I'd like to stay


Suetang

© Copyright 2001 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
ctowen
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1 posted 2001-10-19 07:18 PM


Such a loving flow ... grasping yet releasing.
I enjoyed this greatly!

Startime
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2 posted 2001-10-19 09:24 PM


I feel your yearning to be in his arms forever and wish you both joy and happiness. I love to read of people falling in love. Your write it beautifully. You surely have A Love To Cherish.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2001-10-19 09:38 PM




(sigh) Oh Sue, this is soooooooo romantic! (big hugggsssssss) Your beautiful golden heart sings such sweet love I just know you'll always cherish! (smiles) So beautiful, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Tracey
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4 posted 2001-10-20 01:21 AM


This is romance indeed. What lovely thoughts, what lovely images.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

wayoutwalt
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5 posted 2001-10-21 01:34 AM


a warm poem
DawnG
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6 posted 2001-10-21 01:02 PM


Sue,

I'm still waiting for my love to cherish but your writing reminds me that it does exist and that it is worth waiting for.

                                 Dawn

vandana
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7 posted 2001-10-21 05:41 PM


enjoy
walker
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8 posted 2001-10-21 05:48 PM


So much love created this beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.
nakdthoughts
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9 posted 2001-10-21 08:36 PM


A day without your love
And my heart seems to lose its way
.........
I know this feeling....

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



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