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A Whisper's Caress
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on the horizon of a fairytale

0 posted 2001-10-19 04:51 PM



Silent Shadows

In
whispered
silence
a soft
shadow
of sadness
steals
into
her heart

her light,
extinguished
no longer
warms
her tears


achildsheart
10-19-01

Poetic verse nestled in the warmth of my heart, reveals the sweet yearnings of my soul....

© Copyright 2001 Annie - All Rights Reserved
Interloper
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369
Deep in the heart
1 posted 2001-10-19 05:04 PM


rekindle the fire
take match to relight the flame
no more tears for now


Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 10-19-2001).]

Startime
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since 2000-10-03
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2 posted 2001-10-19 08:00 PM


*sigh* so sad but said so beautifully. Thank you for sharing it with me tonight.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2001-10-20 08:23 AM



Now I am trying to imagine what a cold tear must feel like...I imagine the salt would have left it, too...

well done!

wayoutwalt
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TEXAS (it's all big)
4 posted 2001-10-21 01:55 AM


sad for sure yuh
The Lady of Shallot
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5 posted 2001-10-21 10:14 AM


This made me want to light a candle....
A Whisper's Caress
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on the horizon of a fairytale
6 posted 2001-10-22 10:30 AM


everyone, thank you.....


love the candle ....thanks.  

Poetic verse nestled in the warmth of my heart, reveals the sweet yearnings of my soul....

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