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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2001-10-19 04:49 PM



moonglow lights our way
strolling together in love
softening resolve
~*~

inspired by: Meet Me In The Moonlight

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

© Copyright 2001 The Tall Texan aka Doctor Love - All Rights Reserved
A Whisper's Caress
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on the horizon of a fairytale
1 posted 2001-10-19 04:52 PM


short and sweet, and oh so lovely.....

Poetic verse nestled in the warmth of my heart, reveals the sweet yearnings of my soul....

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
2 posted 2001-10-19 05:01 PM



walk along the path
footsteps matching heartbeats tap
fingers intertwine

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2001-10-19 05:03 PM


"....it must have been moonglow...."
Reminded me of the song....nice.  Nancy

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with you
4 posted 2001-10-19 06:24 PM


with your hand in mine
we stroll under soft moon glow
anticipating

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5 posted 2001-10-19 06:29 PM


that shining object does many things to us
each day of our lives....Nice words...
thanx.

sunshinemist
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Fl. sunshines early mist
6 posted 2001-10-19 06:44 PM


Lovely!  

That sweet kiss
as your lips meet mine
ever so softly.

smiles ~Marie~
happiness is contentment of the heart

Startime
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7 posted 2001-10-19 08:23 PM


*sigh* I am so very glad my poem could inspire such beautiful words as these. I could feel the softness of a romantic walk in the moonlight. I LOVE IT AND AM SAVING THIS TREASURE.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Honeybee
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8 posted 2001-10-19 09:42 PM



I love it!  

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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9 posted 2001-10-19 10:06 PM




(smiles) Such a beautiful expression of sweet love! (big hugggssssss) I love it!!! Your beautiful words always touch the heart! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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10 posted 2001-10-19 10:32 PM


InterLoper~
You wear inspire so nicely~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
   noles1@totcon.com              

Krawdad
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11 posted 2001-10-19 11:16 PM


hmmmm . . .
Could be the opening lines to an interesting story.  (softening resolve???)
There is a lot of serial poetry going around lately . . .
Could there be more?
    
  

"As soon as the generals and the politicos can predict the motions of your mind, lose it."     Wendell Berry


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Deep in the heart
12 posted 2001-10-22 02:09 PM


Thank you for your kind words and taking the time to read my work

Krwadad ~
A serial, me? Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...
13 posted 2001-10-24 04:28 AM



Interloper-
   This is lovely...much enjoyed.
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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14 posted 2001-10-24 08:23 AM


"softening resolve" eh? O YUH
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