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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2001-10-19 03:42 PM

The door closing with a gentle hiss,  motor whirring.
The sensual departure of a momentary love.
Sitting motionless, stunned, waiting for love’s return.
She is not there.

Countless times, returning, sitting, same route, so many tickets
Too familiar the musty smell of countless odors.
Fleeting bits of paper dancing across the floor, silence.
Hoping that love will return, will remember, will remain.

Lingering fragrance in the mind,
patiently  awaiting a physical view.
Silky elegance and flowing lines.
Curves of considerable beauty, unequaled form.
Flawless hands, nails that would teasingly taunt.

Waiting,  watching, wondering if she will.
Can a fleeting passionate moment be forgotten.
Tendrils of steam flowing up from the depths
Clickety clickety clack, the rail gaps wail under their load.
Last train before midnight returns, slows.
Doors open to the familiar hiss and whirr.

Sitting, cheeks flat and tired from the strain.
Shadow lengthening over me from behind.
Standing slowly, hoping,  turning toward the sound,
a sight, so elusive for many days.

She returns, knowing who we are to each other.
A penetrating, sensual stare, a visual aphrodisiac.
A slender, elegant hand grasping a worn bench rail
moving slowly toward me.  Calling me.

Hiss, whirr, the doorman calls.
A cooling empty bench, slightly warm, smiling.
Distant Love moves on into the tunnel of subway romance.
But not alone.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2001-10-19 03:48 PM

OH *SIGH*!!! Oh my...Magnus..lovely, sensual ...love in the subway! Okay....that could work!

Good write...really enjoyed.
~hugs, NancyLee~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2001-10-19 03:51 PM

Nancy Lee....why is it I knew you would enjoy
this....Imagine that....thank you. Happy
that you did.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

3 posted 2001-10-19 04:03 PM

Magnus - Very descriptive and warm. I could feel the heat between these two lovers. Well done. Chris

Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2001-10-19 04:05 PM

Thanx Nightshade...Yes...there certainly is
heat between these two...this is a second
part of another poem....I am struggling to
find the first...

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

5 posted 2001-10-19 07:27 PM

*sigh* absolutely magical. Your pen weaves dreams, my friend, dreams we all love.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

6 posted 2001-10-19 07:28 PM

What we would do if we did not have our dreams to help us through life. Thanx
Startime.

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