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A Whisper's Caress
Senior Member

since 2000-11-03

Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale

0 posted 2001-10-19 12:27 PM

Heart’s Eclipse

In an
eclipse
of emotions

the foolishness
of a
schoolgirl
preys
on her dignity…

shamelessly
tossing aside

any self-pride

she lays her heart out,

open

and
exposed…

a casualty

of her own

obsession.

achildsheart
10-19-01

Poetic verse nestled in the warmth of my heart, reveals the sweet yearnings of my soul....

[This message has been edited by A Whisper's Caress (edited 10-19-2001).]

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

1 posted 2001-10-19 12:30 PM

innocence is bliss...I like this

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2001-10-19 02:21 PM

(sigh) The beauty of innocence fills the heart of this little girl in this wonderful poem! (smiles) The beauty of our hopes and dreams is what makes us special! (big hugggsssss) Wonderful poem, dearest friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Annie, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2001-10-19 02:23 PM

Lovely...very delicately penned.
~hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

4 posted 2001-10-19 04:27 PM

are they childlike dreams
magnificent obsessions
grownups can dream too

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

5 posted 2001-10-19 07:43 PM

*sigh* the innocent dreams of a childs heart. I think we still have many of those dreams but we have just lost sight of them. BRAVO!!!!

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

A Whisper's Caress
Senior Member

since 2000-11-03

Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale

6 posted 2001-10-22 10:38 AM

Thanks everyone, for the kind remarks.

I tried a different style with this piece, hoping to convey a different message than what was actually drawn, but I do appreciate the comments.

The meaning was how foolishly we revert to schoolage antics, mking huge jackasses out of ourselves, when we can't let go.....

Poetic verse nestled in the warmth of my heart, reveals the sweet yearnings of my soul....

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