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It Took Me A While
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It Took Me A While |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia 
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It Took Me A While I stirred and urged Without any plan Emotions to free My writing began A self esteem zero My confidence nil Emotions to free I had pages to fill Having to conquer My unworthy fear Emotions to free Written with a tear It was never easy Words to convert Emotions to free When feeling hurt It was a challenge Removing doubt Emotions to free Poems tumble out In strength to gain Feeling stronger Emotions to free Confined no longer Many poems later Now I can smile Emotions to free It took me a while Hope© 2001 |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
This was a very good read!!!!!!! |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Thanks Windwalker , I am pleased you enjoyed reading it I am constantly confidence building , so your response was appreciated Hope |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Keep Them coming, a very good one! Enjoyed.  ~hugs~smiles ~Marie~ |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
Huge smiles let it bleed! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Hope~ And with each release of thought ... you grow~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Hope, It may have taken you awhile...but look at the results!! Very well done, and I know how it feels to have all of these thoughts bottled up inside and here I sit without anything to help pop the cork!! hugs, Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
What can I say that I have not already said ... this is a most excellent and revealing piece. You should be proud. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Hope, you have expressed yourself well. Your emotions are certainly free, now you can write. And you have done well. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 I love those free emotions. Yes! As MLK said in a different context, "Free at last, thank God, I'm free at last!" |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Many poems later Now I can smile Emotions to free It took me a while ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Yes Hope! Let it all hang out!! Well....you know what I mean....this is great! ~hugs, Nancy~
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh Hope, we're all so proud of you; it is such a difficult thing to do to express thoughts, and you always write your beautiful, loving, and compassionate thoughts so well! (smiles) We all love you so much, sweet Hope! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Hope, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Well, no matter how long it took you I am sure impressed with the finished product. If writing your wonderful poetry has made you this amazing woman I know you to be than keep writing girl.....you are magnificent. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
You are a special lady, your poetry shows it. This one is no different. Great read Hope. |
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