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Startime
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since 2000-10-03

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Canada

0 posted 2001-10-19 09:16 AM

Whisper In Your Ear

Please take me on a pleasure flight,
as gift of words you weave
While sitting under starlit night
your magic I believe

Flames leaping in the hearth reflect
the vision that unfolds
I gaze at you in awed respect
all my attention holds

Lost to this world of noise and strife
I melt into your poem
Transported from this dreary life
traveling from my home

My nightly dreams you have inspired
with visions of delight
When free to feel what I desired
from passions you incite

So weave your spell around me now
with written words so dear
And moving close will you allow
a whisper in your ear?

Karen Torbiak 2001©

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2001-10-19 09:24 AM

Karen,
Always enjoy your romantic notions. Well done

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

2 posted 2001-10-19 09:37 AM

lovely startime...love the rhythm too...

~Victoria~

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

3 posted 2001-10-19 09:46 AM

Since I pay close attention to whispering poems, I heard this one ~ very clearly, indeed....

Thank you for sharing!

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2001-10-19 04:56 PM

Goodness Startime, this is truly something
to read....Very beautiful words lady....very
beautiful.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

5 posted 2001-10-19 05:03 PM

whisper in my ear
my poetry shall be yours
until my melting

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

ctowen
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since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

6 posted 2001-10-19 05:41 PM

Some whispers go on heard ... wouldn't this be a shame!
The warmth of this one travels far.
I may come back to hear it again.

walker
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since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

7 posted 2001-10-19 06:00 PM

Whispers are so sexy at the right moment, so romantic, your poem.

sunshinemist
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since 2001-09-29

Posts 595
Fl. sunshines early mist

8 posted 2001-10-19 06:51 PM

Very lovely and beautifully romantic write! Enjoyed. Thank you.

Hugs, Marie

smiles ~Marie~
happiness is contentment of the heart

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

9 posted 2001-10-19 07:01 PM

Karen
You have such a wonderful gift of words and you certainly weave magic with your words.
Take care.....Sue

Suetang

Larry C

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since 2001-09-10

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United States

10 posted 2001-10-20 01:57 AM

Why certainly. I'll just wait right here. okay?

Tracey
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since 2001-08-29

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where insanity meets breeding

11 posted 2001-10-20 02:07 AM

This is a pleasure flight indeed. I wanna fly that airline. Where do I get a ticket, and when does the next flight leave??!!!

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

wayoutwalt
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TEXAS (it's all big)

12 posted 2001-10-21 01:53 AM

what a nice flow and lovely words o yuh

vandana

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USA

13 posted 2001-10-21 05:54 PM

enjoys

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

14 posted 2001-10-21 05:58 PM

Beautiful flow and lovely words to this Karen. Enjoyed, Nancy.

~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

15 posted 2001-10-21 08:05 PM

Wonderfully penned with a terrific flow!

Maree

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

16 posted 2001-10-21 08:15 PM

a lot of weaving going on in Passions..nicely done

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

17 posted 2001-10-21 10:04 PM

This is a lovely romantic poem. Always enjoy reading your poems.

Voiceless
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since 2001-02-19

Posts 686
Under the stars upon the wind

18 posted 2001-10-21 10:14 PM

I love it!
It is so beautiful,
thank you for sharing it!

Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial)

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