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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2001-10-19 01:12 AM




Tick Tock,
Biological clock,
winding down
not up.

Only time will
stop my rhyme.
But it isn't
my time yet.

I'm still wound up with verse,
so please, go park that Hearse.
I'm not going anywhere
on a sunny day.

© Copyright 2001 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
Larry C
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1 posted 2001-10-19 01:20 AM


So, what are you trying to say?  Was this about babies?  I'm confused.  Fun poem.
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2 posted 2001-10-19 01:28 AM


LOL. My baby turns 14 Saturday. And I face another turn of the calendar in November. No, it's not about babies, just passing time. Sorry for the confusion.  
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3 posted 2001-10-19 04:10 AM


LOL! May you remain fertile for years to come!   Don't want you to suffer from rhyme-o-pause  
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4 posted 2001-10-19 09:02 AM


*giggling* oh I know this feeling well. The clock may tick but we still have hot blood in our veins. BRAVO!!!A great read.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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5 posted 2001-10-19 09:09 AM


Midnitesun,
I sort of feel the same way. LOL Enjoyed

Nan
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6 posted 2001-10-19 09:22 AM


There's the spirit..

Midnitesun
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7 posted 2001-10-19 12:35 PM


Nan, Seymour, startime, balladeer
Thanks for reading and having some fun with this one! Yep, no giving in to rhyme-o-pause. LOL

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