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Beachside Dreams
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Beachside Dreams |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 Beachside Dreams By: Noah Eaton 7/7/01 Glancing down at the beach sand Watching my footprints carve gently beneath I breathe deeply, trying to keep my sorrow down Seeking guidance from the spirits of the sea Rolling down the sand dunes, spinning in the Chinook winds The sand blows against my face, making me feel sleepy Here on the velvet blanket of the Pacific I rest, closing my eyes As the wind slips across my face, pixie dust setting me to dreaming I unveil a pear of dreamy eyes, watching a sweet girl stand in the distance Wearing her swimsuit, lathering her arms and legs with sunscreen Standing tall by the shore, tossing her long hair with a smile Turning her head to make an amorous glance, her smile magically broadens before me She screams as happy as can be, tears sliding down her soft face Running toward me with her arms reaching outward I run to answer her desires, quickly across agate sparkling sands Until I hold her at last, picking her up, spinning her in my arms with wonder We giggle together like kids at school when my lips finally touch hers Feeling love endure, spinning in the wind with my soulmate Until I gently fall on my backside against the sand, holding her over me Showeing her with kisses and cupid marmalade I roll down the sand dunes with her, lips gracefully attached Across the wet beach sands to the water, feeling the water tickle our toes Closing my eyes to feel the warmth of her heart to mine As we spend the day together, kissing with passion beside the sparkling coast As the night comes around, we rest together on the sand, her body over mine Sleepy but yet so happy finally being united truly Falling asleep to feel her tender lips slowly touching mine, her heart singing like a music box And i sleep under the sunset skies, my arms around the girl I love, her hands softly on me I wake up and cry, seeing the ocean without taht special someone to share it with I rise to my feet and blow a kiss to my girl, wherever she may be to reach her and offer her sweet dreams And I walk down the coast alone, crying in despair, leaving footprints behind Watching the tide kiss one gently like a lovers lips, wondering maybe someday such a happiness will open before me... |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Awww this was so pretty...I often have beachside dreams about a hot baywatch type of guy running into my arms. *sigh* She will walk right into your life when you are least expecting it : ) Best wishes always Noah! |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
And based on this experience you will certainly recognize her. Nicely done Noah. Ever the romantic. Don't give up. It'll happen. |
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Nature Girl Junior Member
since 2001-10-19
Posts 31 |
Lovely. So romantic! I loved it. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Oh, sweet Noah, you romantic devil you. This is really a wonderful fantasy. Maybe it will really happen that way some day.  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I think you're ready...hope it happens soon...James |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Wow! This is an ocean dream supreme! Sublime Noah...and I believe she is there somewhere very close by. Soon! Hugs! Sincerely, Regina |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Wonderful read. I enjoyed it immensely Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
'her heart singing like a music box' sweet Noah I really enjoyed this!! Chris Life is not measured by breaths you take, but by moments that take your breath away. |
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sunshinemist Senior Member
since 2001-09-29
Posts 595Fl. sunshines early mist |
Lovely, Noah! So wonderfully romantic. The sea and love. ~hugs~ Mariesmiles ~Marie~ |
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