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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2001-10-18 10:51 PM



Candling Poetic Peeps
~*Marge Tindal*~

You stay up nights candling words
Seeking to find fertility in a thought
Then presenting the world with newborn poetry
Gifted in quilling from the nesting place of you

I find the light of early morn
Shining with the peeps of your crafting
I am sated with the feathering of thoughts
Thank you, poets~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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1 posted 2001-10-18 10:58 PM


You stay up nights candling words
Seeking to find fertility in a thought

That's it...exactly.  Tonight, I'd be happy with just a bit of inspiration.  

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2 posted 2001-10-18 11:10 PM


STUNNING!!I love the whole presentation of this masterpiece in verse. Absolutely perfect.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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3 posted 2001-10-18 11:17 PM


Marge, this is exquisite!!  Perfectly penned...and, I love it!  ~hugs, Nancy~


  ~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

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4 posted 2001-10-18 11:27 PM


Duncan~
Tee-Hee !
I have Love Birds sitting on the nest ...
Tonight it was time to candle the eggs~
Guess what I found ! !    YEP ... a baby poem ~

StarTime~
Thank you so much for that enthusiastic reply~

Enchantress~
Thanks bunches.
Nice to know it didn't 'lay an egg'~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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5 posted 2001-10-18 11:40 PM


What a lovely verse. I also love that picture you found. My favorite authors are the Bronte sisters and Jane Austen, and that picture just reminds me of one of their stories.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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6 posted 2001-10-19 12:29 PM


Oh my but this was simply beautiful Marge.
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7 posted 2001-10-19 12:50 PM


I've candled some peeps, but never found a poem inside. You are so funny, and clever, and sweet. Do I get my lollipop now?
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8 posted 2001-10-19 12:57 PM


Tracey~
Thank you.
You have good taste in your admiration of those authors.
I'd have to throw Ms. Browning in that heap too~

Mysteria~
Glad you like it.  Thanks~
It was a fun write~

MidniteSun~
One lollipop coming right up~
Honest Injun .. it happened just that way~
I think my muses were helping me with the candling~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
   noles1@totcon.com              

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9 posted 2001-10-19 03:21 AM


this is absolutely lovely, you've touched us again with your beautiful words, marge

~ cottage

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10 posted 2001-10-19 03:58 AM


I feel like a chicken
Or maybe just a rooster
'Cause Margie makes me feel like
A real crowing muse-ster!

I shall now little go peep to sleep....'night, Margie!  

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11 posted 2001-10-19 05:44 AM


Lovely Marge...James
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12 posted 2001-10-19 11:41 AM


Cottage~
Glad to have done so~  Thank you.

Balladeer~
Gonna be real careful with my response here~  Tee-Hee !
Now, not another peep outta you~

JamesMichael~
Thank you very much~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
   noles1@totcon.com              

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13 posted 2001-10-19 12:39 PM


quill scratches paper
candle glow reveals the words
nay, reveal the heart

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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14 posted 2001-10-19 01:14 PM


Marge:  This is so uniquely yours! How perceptive to associate the candling of eggs with a poem but so apt!  I love it!

Betty Lou Hebert

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15 posted 2001-10-19 03:13 PM




(smiles) Oh my gosh, this is sooooooooo beautiful, sweet Marge! (big hugggsssssss) Isn't it just amazing how the inspirations are endless! (smiles) Your beautiful golden heart shines with gorgeous inspiration! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marge, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton



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16 posted 2001-10-19 03:35 PM


Marge--If I come to visit you, will you show me how to candle peeps, please?  This is delightful!
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17 posted 2001-10-19 03:46 PM


InterLoper~
Yeah ... that too~

BettyLou~
That's just how it happened~
Kind of like 'gathering corn'~  Tee-Hee !

Noah~
Thank you so much~

Martie~
In a heartbeat ! ! !  
Come on down !
Love you, lady~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
   noles1@totcon.com              

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18 posted 2001-10-20 04:30 PM


You are a wonderful morning person...Thank for being pure sunshine.  
Sincerely,
Regina

Dee
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19 posted 2001-10-20 07:04 PM


Marge, as usual a lovely little bit of inspiration  

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life.     a brand

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20 posted 2001-10-21 12:24 PM


RWood~
*giggling* at 'morning person'~
Glad I shine on yours~

Dee~
Thanks, doll~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
   noles1@totcon.com              

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21 posted 2001-10-26 04:49 AM



Marge-
   I wanna learn how to candle the eggs too!
   I'm counting the days till you have a
   bunch of little peeps running around..LOL!
  
   Hey, Martie...can I hitch a ride to Marge's
   house with you?  Pleeeeeease???

   I'm loving this, my friend.
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky



  

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Marge Tindal
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22 posted 2001-10-27 11:58 PM


Vicky~
Won't be long now for the real peeps~
I'm getting excited at the prospect of tending them~
ALL SIX OF THEM .... YES .. two more ~
Love you~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
   noles1@totcon.com              

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