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0 posted 2001-10-18 10:00 PM




(This is a special tribute to a wonderful true friend I love so very much. Your words always touch me so dearly, and inspire me always, and I always have such a beautiful vision of you. Melissa, this is for you...:-)



Sweet Little Bumblebee (For Melissa Honeybee)
By: Noah Eaton
10/18/01

Sweet little bumblebee, queen of sunshine dreams
May your wings be filled with laughter and glee
Take a sip from luna's warm light
And illuminate your sweet buttercup symphony...

Embowel deep in daffodil dreams as the canary sings
Reflecting friendships colors through sunshine timpani
Seducing even the fairest rose in your heart-throbbing sting
Swinging in lavender gossamer dreams kissed by the angels breeze

Silken threads glitter across your auburn hair
Fluttering through endless waterfalls of glass stairs
Velvet wingtips synchronizing spring rains and loves kisses
Addressing laughter into our hearts we forever cherish

So sweet little bumblebee, sing us your earthly lullaby
For every curious flower and eager bird to sigh
In the enchanted beauty of your luminbescent jubilee
That only your humming angelic heart can bring

You are our sweet Melissa, our sweet Melissa HoneybeeMerry as a butterfly, as lovely as can be...



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1 posted 2001-10-18 10:02 PM


I am sure she will absolutely love this beautiful poem. You paint a wonderful vision in this poem, Noah. Well done.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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2 posted 2001-10-18 10:14 PM


What a wonderful tribute to a lovely lady Noah ... she is going to be thrilled with these sweet sentiments! Very nicely written!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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3 posted 2001-10-18 10:34 PM


so beautiful and thoughtful noah..enjoyed very much..

                   ~Victoria~

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4 posted 2001-10-18 10:43 PM


This is so sweet. I'm sure Melissa will just adore it  

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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5 posted 2001-10-18 10:49 PM


Noah...How thoughtful....she will love this piece written especially for her!  
~hugs, Nancy~


  ~Time has cast a spell on you,
So that you won't ever forget me.~

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6 posted 2001-10-19 11:53 AM


Nice tribute

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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7 posted 2001-10-19 11:54 AM



A lovely reflection of an ever-lovlier heart.

Well done, Noah!

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8 posted 2001-10-19 12:09 PM



For lil' ole me?  
Thank you so much, Noah!  You made my day, you're an    and I really needed some kindness today.  

Of course, I'm biased   but, this is so well expressed, you always weave wonderful images and sentiment within your poems.
I'm sure glad that you stayed  

Big Hugs and even bigger thanks!  

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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