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Ree Ree
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since 2001-06-28
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providence, RI

0 posted 2001-10-18 07:58 PM


Who will help this girl?

Writing feudal words.

Words no one will ever hear
no one here will ever care
about these words, they're useless here.

On a paper from a book.

A book no one will ever read
about a girl no one could need
don't even seem to see her bleed.

With a dieing pen.

A pen fallen from a child's hand
she grew up before it could land
no more playing in the sand.

Inside a painful heart.

A heart that never seems to smile
not understanding what's worth while
can't make it that full extra mile.

One thing will help her through.

That boy who listened when she cried
that girl who forgave when she lied
only they can see inside.

They'll help her through this mess.

© Copyright 2001 maria - All Rights Reserved
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Gaia
1 posted 2001-10-18 08:03 PM


Maybe that boy and girl will come back, and listen to your heart's pleas again. Meanwhile, hugs to you from me.
Startime
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since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
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2 posted 2001-10-18 09:19 PM


Yes, they will and that is what true friendship is all about. BRAVO!!!

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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