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Ree Ree
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since 2001-06-28
Posts 56
providence, RI

0 posted 2001-10-18 07:57 PM


Dear YOU,

I never thought it'd be this hard
I'm crying all the time
I was so sure we'd make it through
I don't know what to do.

I never thought we'd be apart
Time and space causing pain
Your mad at me, i don't know why
I think I'm gonna die

Situation just sucks so much
The world is against us
Now i can't see how we'll get through
I'm hoping that we do.

Yesterday so sure that it'd be
Now so scared that it won't
Doubts filling my restless lone mind
This is just so unkind

Screw this crap, what am i stupid?
These pointless doubts with you
If we could make it all this way
there's nothing more to say.

No one better i could have chose
we'll make it through some how
Determined and ever willing
to make this mess alright

Love Always, ME

© Copyright 2001 maria - All Rights Reserved
Startime
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since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
Canada
1 posted 2001-10-18 08:28 PM


I hope things work out for you. Sometimes going through such hardtimes just makes the love you have stronger. You have written your feelings well

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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