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SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

0 posted 2001-10-18 06:57 PM

These feelings that I have inside
Are feelings I just cannot hide
I think about you all the time
You are always on my mind

There is no place else for me
Except with you don’t you see
Thought of living without you
Always makes me feel so blue

Just to think of us being apart
Cause pain inside my heart
My love for you is so strong
To you it does all belong

No matter what you do
I just can’t stop loving you

© By Sue 10/18/01

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

1 posted 2001-10-18 07:45 PM

This beautiful love poem sings like a sonnet. I am not up on all the rules of modern sonnets but this poem sure feels like one to me. Very well done. I love the read. Your love shows clearly through your words.

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

2 posted 2001-10-18 08:22 PM

Beautiful!

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

3 posted 2001-10-19 11:33 AM

I can't stop loving you
it's useless to try
I'll live in memories
of days gone by
================
Just reminded me of a song. Nice poem

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

4 posted 2001-10-20 02:03 AM

Sue,
You have a great sense of loyalty. Nice poem.

Kelley_Edwards
Junior Member

since 2001-10-16

Posts 21
USA

5 posted 2001-10-20 02:19 AM

When there is room for only one true love in a heart, it is always hard not to say so and you do that so simply. Very well done!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2001-10-20 12:58 PM

(sigh) Such a sweet and beautiful love poem flowing with such whimsical rhyme! (smiles) May sweet love forever flourish in your golden heart! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

7 posted 2001-10-20 01:00 PM

keep writing and evolving!

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

8 posted 2001-10-20 01:01 PM

Very nicely written Sue! I loved your sentiments in this piece ... a tender, thoughtful write, much enjoyed!

Best wishes,
/Kit

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

9 posted 2001-10-20 10:08 PM

Needed to add this to my library.

krystlebabe19
Junior Member

since 2001-11-09

Posts 27

10 posted 2001-11-12 09:42 PM

I just wanted to tell you I loved this poem its written so perfect theirs not one thing I would tell you to do to change it . Thanxs for sharing

~*Krystle*~

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

11 posted 2001-11-12 09:50 PM

Nicely written and great love within...

peaches73533
Senior Member

since 2001-11-04

Posts 981
OK, USA

12 posted 2001-11-12 10:36 PM

Well written and you show great love.
Peaches

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